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Ptera
PteraLv55yr
2019-12-02 08:49

The author is terrible and I want to inform anyone that every novel this author wrote he will drop it or make a sorry excuse like a writers block or something which is a sorry excuse for commitment.

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General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

Nine tailed system, 188 chapters. Hail the ant king, 68 chapters. You can't KILL me, 40 chapters. Eternal Heaven: Lucky Cultivator in Disboard, 124 chapters. Misadventures of the Espada, 70 chapters. Without actually knowing me, you think that I "never" complete fanfictions. It is funny since you might think they are just "Lucky" attempts, when they are almost half of everything I did. I would let it go if the review was about this novel, but you just go and "Lie", thinking you are the judge. This isn't a shop, the customer isn't always right. As for now, for whoever likes my fanfictions and wants to read them, I am their superior because they will be my responsibility. If I can't continue a fanfiction, it is because: 1, i can't continue it; 2, I can't fix the **** that the fanfiction has become; 3, I used wrong informations the entire time: 4, I really lost interest to it because I actually found a better combination between franchise and ability for the fanfiction. If there is something I don't like, they are liars like you

Ptera
PteraLv5

Nyahahahaha😂... Being hated like this is a weird feeling but I guess I'm in the wrong here. Sorry author🙏... Let me clarify why i said that in my review. I haven't read ALL your novels/fanfic but the ones I have read ended up having been dropped or rewrite like this novel here which is not as much entertaining as the original IN MY OPINION which is infuriating to me. I know that it is a bit of a lowball for me saying that you have little commitment which I greatly apologise. I can delete the review if you want so as to not escalate this😊.

General_Paragon:Nine tailed system, 188 chapters. Hail the ant king, 68 chapters. You can't KILL me, 40 chapters. Eternal Heaven: Lucky Cultivator in Disboard, 124 chapters. Misadventures of the Espada, 70 chapters. Without actually knowing me, you think that I "never" complete fanfictions. It is funny since you might think they are just "Lucky" attempts, when they are almost half of everything I did. I would let it go if the review was about this novel, but you just go and "Lie", thinking you are the judge. This isn't a shop, the customer isn't always right. As for now, for whoever likes my fanfictions and wants to read them, I am their superior because they will be my responsibility. If I can't continue a fanfiction, it is because: 1, i can't continue it; 2, I can't fix the **** that the fanfiction has become; 3, I used wrong informations the entire time: 4, I really lost interest to it because I actually found a better combination between franchise and ability for the fanfiction. If there is something I don't like, they are liars like you
General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

Don't worry, as long as you understand. But I am sorry for some novels like Ex-True God or Journey of YC and his companion. As I have said, it is because there can be better combinations or they are getting a bit ****ty. You guys think that they are good, and that's nice for me. But I really can't properly continue them. In ex true god, mc will jist keep getting op before the start of the plot, and in Journey, Jean is already op as **** now that he can get out from YC, and it makes great threats like Xiantuan Wentian look like children, which should be real threats. Also, there are 2 news: 1) the story will start to greatly change once Jean reaches New Moon City, (Spoiler alert: -he will befriend Fen Juechen instead of getting hated-) 2) I am already preparing another ATG fanfiction with mc being a complete outsider, so no reincarnation or something like that, and mc has a glitched out gacha system. Things will be different since the beginning too, unlike here.

Ptera:Nyahahahaha😂... Being hated like this is a weird feeling but I guess I'm in the wrong here. Sorry author🙏... Let me clarify why i said that in my review. I haven't read ALL your novels/fanfic but the ones I have read ended up having been dropped or rewrite like this novel here which is not as much entertaining as the original IN MY OPINION which is infuriating to me. I know that it is a bit of a lowball for me saying that you have little commitment which I greatly apologise. I can delete the review if you want so as to not escalate this😊.
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Chenglei
ChengleiLv11

Okay, so my review to this Novel will be a little bit neutral. So far, the intro and the backstory are very unique and interesting. However, there are a LOT of things that do not make sense in the story afterwards.... 1) Although the character went through hellish events and earned a will of steel, he still should've had some sort of problem with his psyche when reincarnating. However, this does not show. Instead, the character just seems like any other protagonist that wants to be cool... 2) His ability "Visionary" which allows him to create anything and do anything(?) is not explained in detail and instead makes it seem as if the protagonist can just do and create anything... (Basically he has a Broken ability...) 3) This might not bother everyone, but it sure is annoying, is how the Author places the person or characters name before they speak. As if it were a script for a movie. I would suggest doing something else instead. Maybe like, "I'm going to look cool in this lambo, Jean said to himself as he stared at the black Lamborghini" or something similar. 4) My fourth reason for giving this Novel an average rating is because he seems a bit off with one of the characters? This reason may be a little petty, but 😤😤😤 he messed with one of my favorite female characters in ATG. Xia the Frosty Wife 😂 He made her seem so docile when he introduced her to Jean (the protagonist). I mean... he just casually grabs her hand and makes her get in the freaking Lambo. I'm not sure about this... but I don't think her character would allow him to just casually grab her hand.... I mean C'MON she's the Icy Wife!! Not the docile wife... Now then, although I've said a lot. I also believe that this Fan-fic Novel has potential. All the Author needs to do is a few rewrites and this would make an Excellent Fan-fic. :)

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