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2021-06-06 11:31

I only liked 1st chapter.. about rest it gets Creepy would be a good word as you read chps.. On ch2 author fked low key , no 12yr interaction , and made him too Op for 12 yr old.... On CH3 mc starts bootlicking nieli even when he doesn't gain anything. rest chps are forced plot development.. so I dropped 😖😖😖

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