Item: Tales of Demons and Gods: reincarnation
Rating: 2.6
Author: Icezeroz

IcezerozLv56yr

2019-03-01 15:18

Honestly couldn't bear to read this after a couple of chapters, checked ahead and still the same problems. Why is everything in past tense and 3rd person? Don't have anything else to day since I didn't make it further. Wish you the best though even if this wasn't for me.

Tales of Demons and Gods: reincarnation

Madara1996

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Liked by 9 people

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Madara1996Author

Sorry. But this is my writing style. No problem. Thanks for the comment

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Is it harem. ...?

Madara1996:Sorry. But this is my writing style. No problem. Thanks for the comment

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