Item: Tales of Demons and Gods: reincarnation
Rating: 1
Author: ikuqhfkihlfijqlsid

ikuqhfkihlfijqlsidLv56yr

2019-03-03 11:13

Horrible writing, constant out of context references, and borderline retarded MC makes this a story you'll want to drop in the first few chaps...

Tales of Demons and Gods: reincarnation

Madara1996

4.2

94 Chs

Liked by 27 people

Replies7

Madara1996Author

I am sorry if you feel this way. But I am just writing it for fun. So I don't give a **** about your comment. It is your right to comment. This is what I can do. If you request high ends one, This is not for you

6yr

MagikLordLv4

He is now 12 years old (Girls were drooling over his body and handsome face and some married women were blushing looking at him. Men were looking jealous of him.)

6yr

GlasirLv4

What is this?! HAHA. Are you fucking with the author?

MagikLord:He is now 12 years old (Girls were drooling over his body and handsome face and some married women were blushing looking at him. Men were looking jealous of him.)

5yr

Bala_PrakashLv5

Nice reply

4yr

MelshanLv7

Harém?

Madara1996:I am sorry if you feel this way. But I am just writing it for fun. So I don't give a **** about your comment. It is your right to comment. This is what I can do. If you request high ends one, This is not for you

4yr

Madara1996Author

Yes. To a small extent though.

Melshan:Harém?

4yr

DragoPackManLv4

Thought he is going to be with his wife so y HAREM??

Madara1996:Yes. To a small extent though.

4yr

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This mc is the same as ne lie! He only have advantage coZ he knows what will happen! Nothing special about him. And he's a coward too He only acts badass when his opponent is weaker than him by a large margin. 😊😊😊😊 he is even scared of ne lie...

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Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩 Peace of sh1t. 💩💩💩

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topakLv14

Re Wright?!!!🤔 lol 🤣when I read it, still the same as the old one,waste of time,😏.................................................................................

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IcezerozLv5

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