This mc is the same as ne lie! He only have advantage coZ he knows what will happen! Nothing special about him. And he's a coward too He only acts badass when his opponent is weaker than him by a large margin. 😊😊😊😊 he is even scared of ne lie...

Horrible writing, constant out of context references, and borderline retarded MC makes this a story you'll want to drop in the first few chaps...

when i read synopsis no this page, i think is a good story at least. but when i read from prologue until chapter 17. i think its really bad story. there are reason why i said that: 1 writing quality is bad-mediocre even author said it has been revised. in first chapter, author describe progress of MC. sound good right, but really?? to me it was bad bad bad. majority reason i calling it was bad because there is REALLY LACK of dialogue between MC and other, except dialogue between mc and god. what do you think, is it still really good story when there is not having even the dialogue. its bad right. solution: try to make EVEN DIALOGUE per chapter at least. 2 stability update is good, dont need evaluation. 3 story development is mediocre at best. mc is granting 3 op wish but. sigh . . . . . why not using your wish to the fullest. and your story is lack of thrill. 4character design is bad-mediocre. the mc has too op abilty but mc is dont know using the power to the fullest. solution: why not trying remake your story with this 3 wish: a. complete the gamer ability from Book 1 of the Gamer Series: This Is My Life As The Gamer! (Rewrite Version). [gamer body, gamer mind, fictional adaptation and bunch of fictional story incluiding game, novel and film] b. boosted gear with abilty boosting the concept (even effect of item, pill, etc) c. kaleindoscope. which if you combine with boosted gear, you can traveling time and another universe.

This started pretty decent but has started to get more and more ridiculous as it goes along. Powers and transformation don’t make sense for the level the MC’s supposedly at, MC gets abilities that defy the laws of the world, so on and so forth... If you’re a fan of Tales of Demons and Gods, this fan-fic will probably leave you disappointed. If you’re looking for a novel about an OP MC and don’t want to think about if anything makes sense...meh, might as well try it.

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Honestly couldn't bear to read this after a couple of chapters, checked ahead and still the same problems. Why is everything in past tense and 3rd person? Don't have anything else to day since I didn't make it further. Wish you the best though even if this wasn't for me.

It's bad. Plain and ******. Its writing quality is absolutely abysmal and is unable to show any sense of coherency whatsoever. The novel's flow is worse than a stationary rock, as it reads like a set of statements horribly conjoined together. The multitude of grammatical errors kill this novel at a higher rate than measles does in Madagascar. The characters are dry and one dimensional. It's MC is the stereotypical "I train hard with cheats for the good of humanity, I'm never wrong and never corrupted". All the while the side characters blend into background like a chameleon. The world building is next to non-existent. It relies heavily on the reader's own knowledge of the series, and takes little moments to clarify both the setting and characters. At chapter 4, it's tough to truly get a grasp on the story's development. I truly hope the story improves in future chapters. But I know that I won't be there to read them, as these small four chapters were already enough to leave me permanently disappointed.

There is nothing new in this story.. The retarded MC just follows the main plot like an idiot and there are 8 ANNOUNCEMENTS in this f*cking story. That means the author is just raising the chapter count.. Shameless retard auther.

Rewrite? noooooooo! It's really going well. I like the novel. And its going back from the start again? Waiting again for chapters. Tsk! What a waste. 40 40 404040 40 40 40 40 40 40 40