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Kiaruu
KiaruuLv144yr
2020-07-20 12:29

Well this fanfic had promising start. But as the novel progresses it becomes worse and worse. This is just another super wish fulfillment type of novel. Well what do i even expect from fanfics. First of all, power system of this fanfic is absolute garbage. Sometimes it seems author himself doesnโ€™t even know what he is writing. It may be due to world travelling part but even then it is just so stupid. I dropped this fanfic after author said Azure Dragon God from ATG is comparable to whatever dragon from Highschool DxD. Worst thing is how author make mc super godly strong. Okay that is not problem? Well author just describes 70% of the chapter just how handsome and super strong he is. Believe me, I am not exaggerating 70% of this novel is just glorifying MC and describing how nothing can harm him. You wanna see some action? Nope author will just describe how godly MC is. Last of all, characters in this fanfic are all superficial. I dont have much to say on this. Also author just copies sentences and paragraphs from original sources. There is nothing original in his writing. All in all this is one of the worst fanfics on the platform. I dont even know how people still read this.

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JosePascua
JosePascuaLv4

You say all those things but ... you keep reading it, right? The author certainly glorifies Issei in power and appearance by turning him into a 'pantys wet', but he does it in a way that is not unpleasant or boring. So even if you read this kind of comment, I recommend that you read the fanfic or the novel before taking something for granted and qualifying a book as 'bad', all this I tell you from experience, it has already happened to me several times that I, for idiot, lose of reading an excellent book because of this type of comments. I think the saying 'Seeing is Believing' fits like a ring on finger doesn't it? /////////////////////////////////////////////////// /////////////////////////////////////////////////// ********* SPOILER ******** /////////////////////////////////////////////////// /////////////////////////////////////////////////// Also in the later chapters on ATG, it shows that he is only recovering after the fight he had with Nyarlathotep.

Kiaruu
KiaruuLv14

No, as i said above i dropped it after MC got into ATG because of how stupid power system was. And that was almost 6-8 monts ago. The reason why i wrote this review was i saw this fanfic when i was scrolling through the fanfiction section

Heavenly_Chaos
Heavenly_ChaosLv3

lol no dragon from dxd is comparable to atg dragon god except maybe ophis and red and that's kinda, I don't remember this novel stating this

shirou_sureiya
shirou_sureiyaLv4

because its Chinese you know the there power scaling in cultivation verse is exaggerated so does the names of the techniques attack cultivation and you know the rest

Heavenly_Chaos:lol no dragon from dxd is comparable to atg dragon god except maybe ophis and red and that's kinda, I don't remember this novel stating this
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AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

I love this fanfic. For those of you guys that are hesitating because it has NTR in the description, don't. Like the author said the girls don't f*** the other guys, so it's not that bad. Think of this fanfic as an alternate reality/alternate universe. In the original they lived happily ever after, and in this one they just didn't. If you don't want to hate the original girls, then you should probably not read it because you will. The MC will rebuild his Harem with different women from different worlds. As he trains to get stronger and stronger. The only thing I don't like about the novel. Is when he goes to different worlds, it just takes too got dam long. I understand that the author is trying to build relationships with the future harem members. And like the author said, hes trying not to make it look like the MC is a Pokemon Master. That's just throwing poke balls at the women in capturing them. It's just that he's in a different world chapter after chapter after chapter. Overtime it just doesn't feel like a DxD fanfic anymore. As soon as he starts traveling to different worlds, he goes to one world after another and never really goes back. The author was doing a good job at throwing in dialogue of the DxD world. Like updating us on what was going on with in the DxD world with the MC's disappearance. But so far it seems like he's just hasn't done it since the past couple chapters, and it has sort of lost the DxD fanfic Vibe for me. For me personally I would love less erotic chapters like describing how they're having *** for a whole two chapters. And have less chapters of each World he's traveling to. And throw in more information on whats going on in the DxD world. Another thing is that I don't like that the other DxD characters know about what happened and they hate what the girls did to the MC. But they don't want to punish the girls because they don't want them to suffer, punish them a little bit. Like make the angle a fallen angle. That would have been great. But not much punishment has happened, which is BS in my book. But other than that I love it.

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