LilLegendThe14th

Isn't this a translation of danmachi:heros of the world

Sorry for the spelling and grammar ,my bad

I see "author has some concept of reason BUT. .. Zuko was the only other person who could stop the war and genocide that would happen take place then what the fire will make factories ,destruction of nature ,inbalance of the elements ,and start developing towards a worse situation of what we are facing today .all I'm getting is you watch allot of propaganda, believe what internet tells you to be true ,that your vision the world of the world is narrow ,one side and self centered and that should watch avatar Is based on buddhism and the current DALAI LAMA Who is is named Tenzin Gyatso. so I suggest re-watching Avatar the last Airbender And legends of korra and rethink the book

It's the 2 millenia a not the twenty first millenia and it was somewhere 31 k he was forced to step and be THE EMPEROR but he came into being just by when apes were evolving into cave men or even way before. I just want to show off a bit of my Warhammer knowledge not trying to criticize but I just want a smug know it all. But awesome chapter .

Will stay in tune. Just keep the quality of the story to the standard you promise to deliver and I will deliver stones and support to the story to the end. That's fair but be mindful on what you promise and keep harsh comments to a minimum. Gods blessings come to you and be steadfast through life's trials .

To the author :the comment at the top. Even though what you said is harsh. I can't deny it to be false and it is a harsh truth . I personally am following your daily chapters , so it will suck for me if you gave up. I'm too broke for patron or for anything else that isn't free. But I'm getting off topic. All I want to say is that the story is great and I if you want to take it down and stick to patron then I get it and wish you luck from a satisfied reader. I don't have many power stones, all I can give a sad 3 that I have but will donate when I have any in future, regardless.

F@#ken finally .you know I have been waiting for this moment since Leo left the pride lands and finally the whispers of the legend, the myth, named after the word lion it's self, Dan-dun-Da LEO,once the exiled prince,now current king and in future lion emperor .

Really good.BUT you lost a lot of people and might have ruined this story when the protagonist WITH super bloodline and intelligence did nothing when his woman was taken and had a child with the king, that grew up into a young woman became he couldn't be bothered killing the king and want someone other to kill him with procrastination .even if he's going to kill the king. The woman he like still gets plowed and has a grown daughter. How the hell is he going be chill with daughter and not feel greened looking at her and have sex with her will be messed up. And not to mention getting together with the women he likes because no matter whan they feel they can't just ignore that she was wife of the king for years. So honestly you probably messed up this book for me and lot of people ,i don't know how you going to deal with the future plot but unless you some how make it worth it . Otherwise good writing but your main character will be seen as unreliable where it should of mattered .no matter how much you say it is character development or plot building . You will lose alot of readers .

Though there is some repetitive parts at the end .the story gives off really good kingdom building structure and thought out frame work of history and myth in the story. Positive tip of adding little more depth and story to named characters, also add more variety of descriptive vocabulary to build more intriguing and detailed picture for readers on an a personal request is to please carry on with the story and a volume to see if this story can catch. But essentially good book that can use some tweaking. But thanks for the story

Crows but same difference .