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Turtlemaster122
Turtlemaster122Lv56yr
2019-01-31 11:54

I read the change of dragon, it was really amazing I expect good things out of this novel. Good luck, I’m cheering for you.(I like the original story so, if possible can you make it similar)

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Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

Hmmm most part its pretty much the same i would say but no Fuuki or Erecia part, like how the 3 factions leader found out what happen is the same so what i'm gonna do is transfer ise to different world with different timeline? like 1 year on the other world 1 month in the dxd world idk if thats the right word since english is not my 1st language, still thinking how i'm gonna write it though because on my head its all there but to write it down is hard lol... and be warned i have no fixed time when will i release the next chapter because im doing this only on a whim, heck u might have to wait for a while before next chapter comes out since im a total noob on writing a novel literally my 1st time writing

Goblin_of_Trash
Goblin_of_TrashLv5

Hey did the change of a dragon finish in 10 chapters? Cause that seems like a short story to me. Anyway I'm loving the story so far.

Turtlemaster122
Turtlemaster122Lv5

It didn’t finish, it sadly never updated ever again

Goblin_of_Trash:Hey did the change of a dragon finish in 10 chapters? Cause that seems like a short story to me. Anyway I'm loving the story so far.
Goblin_of_Trash
Goblin_of_TrashLv5

Big oof

Turtlemaster122:It didn’t finish, it sadly never updated ever again
Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

Its been like 2 months ish since its last update so its 80% chance dropped already

Turtlemaster122
Turtlemaster122Lv5

Feels bad. They should’ve finish the tournament first then they can drop it

Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

Sadly we can't never have everything in life lol was pretty nerve wrecking when i 1st saw its last update was 2 months ago... its fresh for me because usually i dropped a novel when its NTR but the potentials are so big that its a shame to just drop it like that

Sin_of_Lust
Sin_of_LustLv12

VERY ENTERTAINING FANFICTION...

Blacker_black
Blacker_blackLv4

It updated recently

Leixein:Hmmm most part its pretty much the same i would say but no Fuuki or Erecia part, like how the 3 factions leader found out what happen is the same so what i'm gonna do is transfer ise to different world with different timeline? like 1 year on the other world 1 month in the dxd world idk if thats the right word since english is not my 1st language, still thinking how i'm gonna write it though because on my head its all there but to write it down is hard lol... and be warned i have no fixed time when will i release the next chapter because im doing this only on a whim, heck u might have to wait for a while before next chapter comes out since im a total noob on writing a novel literally my 1st time writing
Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

And you need to wait for another 3 months for the next chapter 🤣🤣🤣

Blacker_black:It updated recently
Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

And you need to wait for another 3 months for the next chapter 🤣🤣🤣

Blacker_black:It updated recently
THE_EXPERTS
THE_EXPERTSLv3

Damn it's been 1 yr without updating......the author is scamming us😒😒😠😠😤😠

Ayanakoyi
AyanakoyiLv3

Actualizarlo

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AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

I love this fanfic. For those of you guys that are hesitating because it has NTR in the description, don't. Like the author said the girls don't f*** the other guys, so it's not that bad. Think of this fanfic as an alternate reality/alternate universe. In the original they lived happily ever after, and in this one they just didn't. If you don't want to hate the original girls, then you should probably not read it because you will. The MC will rebuild his Harem with different women from different worlds. As he trains to get stronger and stronger. The only thing I don't like about the novel. Is when he goes to different worlds, it just takes too got dam long. I understand that the author is trying to build relationships with the future harem members. And like the author said, hes trying not to make it look like the MC is a Pokemon Master. That's just throwing poke balls at the women in capturing them. It's just that he's in a different world chapter after chapter after chapter. Overtime it just doesn't feel like a DxD fanfic anymore. As soon as he starts traveling to different worlds, he goes to one world after another and never really goes back. The author was doing a good job at throwing in dialogue of the DxD world. Like updating us on what was going on with in the DxD world with the MC's disappearance. But so far it seems like he's just hasn't done it since the past couple chapters, and it has sort of lost the DxD fanfic Vibe for me. For me personally I would love less erotic chapters like describing how they're having *** for a whole two chapters. And have less chapters of each World he's traveling to. And throw in more information on whats going on in the DxD world. Another thing is that I don't like that the other DxD characters know about what happened and they hate what the girls did to the MC. But they don't want to punish the girls because they don't want them to suffer, punish them a little bit. Like make the angle a fallen angle. That would have been great. But not much punishment has happened, which is BS in my book. But other than that I love it.

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