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_UwU_OWO_UwU_Lv44yr
2020-07-03 13:00

I really liked the story and how things were progressing, there also aren't many stories like this out there, so it's really a shame that this got dropped(i assume it was dropped cos its been like a year sine the last update).

White Snake

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3.9
52 Chs

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okay im putin ths score cause i wil read more after, but ive got an issue here, he said he didnt want vampire because well how would he do if he end up alone wwithout any blood. But it can also be said for all the others races with food or water.... only lich wouldn't have to worry about that

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1) Writing Quality is Poor. 2) The Reasons for choosing his Race as a Snake is... I don't even know... I didn't get it at ALL. 3) His reasons for not choosing another Race are just as confusing. 4) His personality seems a bit weird. 5) His 'tragic' past is incredibly short and doesn't make much sense.

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The concept is kinda fun to read. But im not sure how it will be executed. I will need to wait till there's 100+ chapters to decide. My real rating would be around 3 to 3.5stars, but I rated higher to motivate author and bring up the ratings for this novel. Good luck!

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Authors needs to use logical reasoning or make up something reasonable. Idk of the author thinks it鈥檚 funny always making mc and system bicker with each other but it鈥檚 annoying..... And the authors makes too much bad jokes which gets annoying Ex: at the beginning of the novels wouldn鈥檛 stop talking about sperms and joking about how many babies they made something like 133555 idk I forgot. Mc is like a little annoying ***** and the system is the annoying. Then there is needing the permission of the system to name himself which is annoying. Lets not forget he needs to have sex with a female whether it be a monster or human so his gender doesn鈥檛 change. Also his reasoning for choosing a snake as his reincarnation is retarded. The grammar mistakes are annoying but I can look past that. If the author can change the mc鈥檚 personality (make him less annoying) and make him use proper logic or give reasonable explanation then I would say the story is great... And stop making jokes with sperms so annoying, and the system should be there to server him idk why it鈥檚 so annoying. Edit: improved the rating since it's more logical in the later chapters but there still annoying jokes or what you want to call it.

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