Authors needs to use logical reasoning or make up something reasonable. Idk of the author thinks it’s funny always making mc and system bicker with each other but it’s annoying..... And the authors makes too much bad jokes which gets annoying Ex: at the beginning of the novels wouldn’t stop talking about sperms and joking about how many babies they made something like 133555 idk I forgot. Mc is like a little annoying ***** and the system is the annoying. Then there is needing the permission of the system to name himself which is annoying. Lets not forget he needs to have sex with a female whether it be a monster or human so his gender doesn’t change. Also his reasoning for choosing a snake as his reincarnation is retarded. The grammar mistakes are annoying but I can look past that. If the author can change the mc’s personality (make him less annoying) and make him use proper logic or give reasonable explanation then I would say the story is great... And stop making jokes with sperms so annoying, and the system should be there to server him idk why it’s so annoying. Edit: improved the rating since it's more logical in the later chapters but there still annoying jokes or what you want to call it.
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