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Chenglei
ChengleiLv116yr
2019-01-11 08:49

1) Writing Quality is Poor. 2) The Reasons for choosing his Race as a Snake is... I don't even know... I didn't get it at ALL. 3) His reasons for not choosing another Race are just as confusing. 4) His personality seems a bit weird. 5) His 'tragic' past is incredibly short and doesn't make much sense.

White Snake

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52 Chs

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Cemall
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Maybe he liked the warlock of the magus world you know leylin is snake too

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tune50
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But he could have easily made up a reasonable explanation.....

Cemall:Maybe he liked the warlock of the magus world you know leylin is snake too
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Authors needs to use logical reasoning or make up something reasonable. Idk of the author thinks it鈥檚 funny always making mc and system bicker with each other but it鈥檚 annoying..... And the authors makes too much bad jokes which gets annoying Ex: at the beginning of the novels wouldn鈥檛 stop talking about sperms and joking about how many babies they made something like 133555 idk I forgot. Mc is like a little annoying ***** and the system is the annoying. Then there is needing the permission of the system to name himself which is annoying. Lets not forget he needs to have sex with a female whether it be a monster or human so his gender doesn鈥檛 change. Also his reasoning for choosing a snake as his reincarnation is retarded. The grammar mistakes are annoying but I can look past that. If the author can change the mc鈥檚 personality (make him less annoying) and make him use proper logic or give reasonable explanation then I would say the story is great... And stop making jokes with sperms so annoying, and the system should be there to server him idk why it鈥檚 so annoying. Edit: improved the rating since it's more logical in the later chapters but there still annoying jokes or what you want to call it.

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