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Precheur
PrecheurLv56yr
2019-01-10 06:11

okay im putin ths score cause i wil read more after, but ive got an issue here, he said he didnt want vampire because well how would he do if he end up alone wwithout any blood. But it can also be said for all the others races with food or water.... only lich wouldn't have to worry about that

White Snake

Prazal
3.9
52 Chs

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Immortal_Potato
Immortal_PotatoLv6

But water and biomass are much easier to find then blood. A snake can store food, and a dragon can hibernate for thousands of years. Titans would probably break out of their prison or have some unique hibernation method. Fallen Angels might no require sustenance like food or water. Finally humans... are weak.

6yr
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Precheur
PrecheurLv5

yeah i've got no issue with that, but i just find it a bit "dumb" i guess to make you choice with this argument you know ? I feel like it's not logical, i mean if you begin to think with this sort of mindset, then no need to even care, after all, you could also be reborn in the middle of space, or even in the deepest part of the ocean. That's a bit idiot i think... that's all

Immortal_Potato:But water and biomass are much easier to find then blood. A snake can store food, and a dragon can hibernate for thousands of years. Titans would probably break out of their prison or have some unique hibernation method. Fallen Angels might no require sustenance like food or water. Finally humans... are weak.
6yr
4
Immortal_Potato
Immortal_PotatoLv6

If the argument is dumb then why did you argue? "That's a bit idiot..", wouldn't you agree?

Precheur:yeah i've got no issue with that, but i just find it a bit "dumb" i guess to make you choice with this argument you know ? I feel like it's not logical, i mean if you begin to think with this sort of mindset, then no need to even care, after all, you could also be reborn in the middle of space, or even in the deepest part of the ocean. That's a bit idiot i think... that's all
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Precheur
PrecheurLv5

what ? i don't understand sorry... I was just saying i found it dumb as a reason to get ride of a race with a falacious argument... I wasn't talking to you so... I just wanted to make a review about what i find strange....

Immortal_Potato:If the argument is dumb then why did you argue? "That's a bit idiot..", wouldn't you agree?
6yr
5
Jlairu
JlairuLv11

XD he's a little sensitive

Precheur:what ? i don't understand sorry... I was just saying i found it dumb as a reason to get ride of a race with a falacious argument... I wasn't talking to you so... I just wanted to make a review about what i find strange....
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Cronos97
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Chenglei
ChengleiLv11

1) Writing Quality is Poor. 2) The Reasons for choosing his Race as a Snake is... I don't even know... I didn't get it at ALL. 3) His reasons for not choosing another Race are just as confusing. 4) His personality seems a bit weird. 5) His 'tragic' past is incredibly short and doesn't make much sense.

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Jack_N_Mikhail
Jack_N_MikhailLv15

The concept is kinda fun to read. But im not sure how it will be executed. I will need to wait till there's 100+ chapters to decide. My real rating would be around 3 to 3.5stars, but I rated higher to motivate author and bring up the ratings for this novel. Good luck!

6yr
PAB2377
PAB2377Lv4

seems to be doing a good job. but MC seems like dumbo. make it so that he grows to be a little cunning and smart. the SYSTEM is OP. explanation seems to repeat again.

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Prazal
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InHisName
InHisNameLv6

Dozens of chapters with an extremely annoying MC arguing with a somehow more annoying A.I. If that wasn't enough the writing quality was terrible. How can something go so wrong...? Read and find out...

4yr
tune50
tune50Lv3

Authors needs to use logical reasoning or make up something reasonable. Idk of the author thinks it’s funny always making mc and system bicker with each other but it’s annoying..... And the authors makes too much bad jokes which gets annoying Ex: at the beginning of the novels wouldn’t stop talking about sperms and joking about how many babies they made something like 133555 idk I forgot. Mc is like a little annoying ***** and the system is the annoying. Then there is needing the permission of the system to name himself which is annoying. Lets not forget he needs to have sex with a female whether it be a monster or human so his gender doesn’t change. Also his reasoning for choosing a snake as his reincarnation is retarded. The grammar mistakes are annoying but I can look past that. If the author can change the mc’s personality (make him less annoying) and make him use proper logic or give reasonable explanation then I would say the story is great... And stop making jokes with sperms so annoying, and the system should be there to server him idk why it’s so annoying. Edit: improved the rating since it's more logical in the later chapters but there still annoying jokes or what you want to call it.

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MegaMacho
MegaMachoLv6

Dude, the toxicity of this novel is unparalleled. why the heck did you have to do that way? It had potential but now is just a waste. I hope you reboot this novel in a better way, bye.

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