White Snake Book Review By Prazal - WebNovel

PrazalAuthor6yr

2018-12-31 10:41

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White Snake

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NebulusTyphoonLv10

Haven’t started yet but what’s the wep type for the main char? Like does he mainly use a sword or spear etc, that and if it’s gonna be a one heroine,harem, or no romance?

6yr

PrazalAuthor

Main character will use Saber for close combat and Spear for long range and there will be harem and romance.

6yr

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PrazalAuthor

But harem will not go overboard. It will be balance with the plot.

6yr

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TheImmortalLv5

Q.1 why are you using Shiva if you want to write harem... Isn't Krishna a better candidate? Q.2 Will we have a huge harem or not

6yr

PrazalAuthor

53% of his personality is similar to shiva while 28% of his personality is similar to vishnu(Krishna). It will be harem but not the huge one.

6yr

JacksmithLv14

So what's the max and min for the harem number? 3-8?

Prazal:53% of his personality is similar to shiva while 28% of his personality is similar to vishnu(Krishna). It will be harem but not the huge one.

6yr

HeaveahLv5

Harem 5+

6yr

PrazalAuthor

Yes 3-8

Jacksmith:So what's the max and min for the harem number? 3-8?

6yr

ImmortalHERMITLv4

IK ITS KINDA OUT OF DATE but plss carry on this. hope u don't drop it and update faster

6yr

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VoiD_dEmOnLv11

Can i ask the release schedule?

6yr

PrazalAuthor

It changes with time, but you can find the latest schedule on the synopsis.

VoiD_dEmOn: Can i ask the release schedule?

6yr

VoiD_dEmOnLv11

When will the story going to continue?

6yr

PrazalAuthor

March 26

VoiD_dEmOn:When will the story going to continue?

6yr

VoiD_dEmOnLv11

Will there be a mass release or just 1 regular chapter

6yr

VoiD_dEmOnLv11

Will there be a mass release or just 1 regular chapter

6yr

VoiD_dEmOnLv11

Will there be a mass release or just 1 regular chapter

6yr

VoiD_dEmOnLv11

Will there be a mass release or just 1 regular chapter

6yr

VoiD_dEmOnLv11

Will there be a mass release or just 1 regular chapter

6yr

VoiD_dEmOnLv11

Will there be a mass release or just 1 regular chapter

6yr

VoiD_dEmOnLv11

Will there be a mass release or just 1 regular chapter

6yr

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JacksmithLv14

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6yr

Cronos97Lv4

I like this novel a lot continue like thisss pliss👍👌👌👌 ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️

6yr

PrecheurLv5

okay im putin ths score cause i wil read more after, but ive got an issue here, he said he didnt want vampire because well how would he do if he end up alone wwithout any blood. But it can also be said for all the others races with food or water.... only lich wouldn't have to worry about that

6yr

ChengleiLv11

1) Writing Quality is Poor. 2) The Reasons for choosing his Race as a Snake is... I don't even know... I didn't get it at ALL. 3) His reasons for not choosing another Race are just as confusing. 4) His personality seems a bit weird. 5) His 'tragic' past is incredibly short and doesn't make much sense.

6yr

Jack_N_MikhailLv15

The concept is kinda fun to read. But im not sure how it will be executed. I will need to wait till there's 100+ chapters to decide. My real rating would be around 3 to 3.5stars, but I rated higher to motivate author and bring up the ratings for this novel. Good luck!

6yr

PAB2377Lv4

seems to be doing a good job. but MC seems like dumbo. make it so that he grows to be a little cunning and smart. the SYSTEM is OP. explanation seems to repeat again.

6yr

InHisNameLv6

Dozens of chapters with an extremely annoying MC arguing with a somehow more annoying A.I. If that wasn't enough the writing quality was terrible. How can something go so wrong...? Read and find out...

4yr

tune50Lv3

Authors needs to use logical reasoning or make up something reasonable. Idk of the author thinks it’s funny always making mc and system bicker with each other but it’s annoying..... And the authors makes too much bad jokes which gets annoying Ex: at the beginning of the novels wouldn’t stop talking about sperms and joking about how many babies they made something like 133555 idk I forgot. Mc is like a little annoying ***** and the system is the annoying. Then there is needing the permission of the system to name himself which is annoying. Lets not forget he needs to have sex with a female whether it be a monster or human so his gender doesn’t change. Also his reasoning for choosing a snake as his reincarnation is retarded. The grammar mistakes are annoying but I can look past that. If the author can change the mc’s personality (make him less annoying) and make him use proper logic or give reasonable explanation then I would say the story is great... And stop making jokes with sperms so annoying, and the system should be there to server him idk why it’s so annoying. Edit: improved the rating since it's more logical in the later chapters but there still annoying jokes or what you want to call it.

5yr

MegaMachoLv6

Dude, the toxicity of this novel is unparalleled. why the heck did you have to do that way? It had potential but now is just a waste. I hope you reboot this novel in a better way, bye.

6yr

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