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CarolinaWuChen
CarolinaWuChenLv105yr
2019-12-07 15:54

I don’t recommend this novel. I dropped it becuz there are so many cliches. This novel has repeated reviews from the same people so the rating is high but it sucks. The MC has an obvious hero complex and there are so many annoying characters. Almost everybody we r introduced to in the first 15 chapters r deadweight. The character Ange is the single most annoying character in the entire novel so far. And Xiao Mei’s backstory is similar to that of a white lotus. This story has some inadequacies. Things don’t just add up and the stuff that does happen doesn’t make any logical sense. ALL IN ALL DONT READ.

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