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UsOfLiPLv125yr
2019-08-31 09:08

I really like this book although there are some flaws. I've seen previous reviews and critiques on how the book should go. Unfortunately, by my opinion - The Author/Translator has the final say. It is his novel. Im a fan. Although it took some chapters to get into it. By when it hit, "IT HITS". Keep doing what you're doing and please upload more asap. Like all books, "GOOD BOOKS" - It gets more interesting as the pages unfold. Of course you're gonna have a hard time at first. Just read the summary if you're the type only want action now. LOL Hulk came to mind when I wrote "ACTION NOW"!!! But yeh, the more in depth the book is, the more satisfying the read. If people are gonna complain that it should be a certain way, ask them to have you proof-read their novels. ***Spoiler Alert - THEY PROBABLY DONT WRITE OR HAVE A CREATIVE IMAGINATION TO WRITE, 🤣🤣🤣. But yeh, awesome book, but i need to know more - so upload, upload, upload. If you're able, I seen that you were ill and that caused a delay. Thank you

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