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MiuNovelsLv135yr
2019-02-06 21:45

Just an honest review. Possitive: 1. The english and grammar is good, no compain about that. 2. Updates regularly, keep it up author. 3. Though a lot said that there is force and rape and all that, in my opinion, there isn't since both parties agreed. 4. Said that MC is easily swayed, in my opinion, she's just plain curios. Negative: 1. Romance is bland and cringy. I have read up to 100 and had to stop there. 2. It was like reading a porno than a romance (though I'm okay with it) but too much can spoil the story. I felt like, if they have s*** for real, I won't feel anything special about since they're always doing it, kinda feeling. 3. ML should be developed more and act like a real man. I get the feeling that he was developed according to the author's perpective. I think that's why everyone is saying he's not develop. I suggest that if you write the ML, take it as a true Male perspective. Observe males more if that helps. 4. The story is a bit dragging while the comedic scene seemed force. I suggest balance the mystery, the plot, the romance, the s***. In terms of humor, can't really suggest anything but to read and watch comedic movies more? But overall, don't let the negative comments drag you down! Fighting! (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

His Genius Wife is a Superstar

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FlowerSeason
FlowerSeasonLv10

Can related. This kind of review is the one that people need to see👏

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MiuNovels
MiuNovelsLv13

Thanks 😊

FlowerSeason:Can related. This kind of review is the one that people need to see👏
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ItsmeLame_Sol
ItsmeLame_SolLv11

Uhh this is What a Review should be hah👍👍👍👍

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ItsmeLame_Sol
ItsmeLame_SolLv11

Yes i agree..😁😁

FlowerSeason:Can related. This kind of review is the one that people need to see👏
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BowDownPeasants
BowDownPeasantsLv10

True

5yr
Akusaser
AkusaserLv6

Nice review.

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MiuNovels
MiuNovelsLv13

Thanks 😁

Akusaser:Nice review.
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shivaay_rs_rs
shivaay_rs_rsLv4

Nice

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shivaay_rs_rs
shivaay_rs_rsLv4

Nice

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annoj32617
annoj32617Lv5

I agree

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annoj32617
annoj32617Lv5

I agree

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098890
098890Lv4

Because of your nice/beautiful /nice./beautiful /etc. I am giving your review a five star★★★★★ review And please accept this d(´▽｀*)

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RedSonia
RedSoniaLv15

I love your detailed review! 👍 I hope you can also review my novel: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13300478706416005 Thanks! 💖

5yr
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XuanTianMing
XuanTianMingLv10

I agree with you on most points but I have to say, the ML is on point. He isn't the romantic hero CEO, but an average guy with sexual desires but romantic and respectful because he waits till she is ready. The ML is already real enough, with a bit more fantasy characteristics maybe, virgin till 30 something and he is a rich and handsome man. Impossible! If the author happens to read my comment, don't be discouraged! Don't take inspiration from some comedy movies, write as you like and you can edit the book after you complete it. That way, it's easier to figure out what's lacking.

5yr
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XuanTianMing
XuanTianMingLv10

I agree with you on most points but I have to say, the ML is on point. He isn't the romantic hero CEO, but an average guy with sexual desires but romantic and respectful because he waits till she is ready. The ML is already real enough, with a bit more fantasy characteristics maybe, virgin till 30 something and he is a rich and handsome man. Impossible! If the author happens to read my comment, don't be discouraged! Don't take inspiration from some comedy movies, write as you like and you can edit the book after you complete it. That way, it's easier to figure out what's lacking.

5yr
Reborn976
Reborn976Lv1

its nice

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