Writing Quality = Good Stability Updare = Really Good But as for the rest.. Bad... Paragon of destruction = Paragon of average First point, MC doesn't seem to be logical at all, he threw golden opportunity to train just because he want to find a shortcut (that doesnt exist) or can't handle the training. Second point, MC does stupid logical decision even if the best answer/solution is slapped at his face, he goes full retard because of plot (?) Third point, the MC is AVERAGE, he doesnt have any talent whatsoever; what he has is the forbidden real, that from what is shown is not even that 'legendary', an example of a (my imaginary) scale: Common - Rare - Rare+ - Epic - Legendary The forbidden realm is only at Rare, or at max between Rare and Rare+ But the worst point is that 'this advantage' that he has on the forbidden realm IS USELESS; he has a forbidden realm that is only mentioned at the start of the novel and during chapter 50 from what I understood, and nothing. We know nothing about the forbidden realm, what it is exactly, what type it is, NOTHING, he doesn even use it; and we are already 100+ chapters in.
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LIKEGenuinely sorry, I didn't think of that even though I've done the same before, it's just that when I did it I left a disclaimer, and even though I'm not forcing you to or saying that it's better to do it people usually don't go back, so sorry for assuming, I'll take the comment down if it offends you too much though.
God I sound like a prick
Never saw anything more stupid than this review. I know that I should respect other peoples views but when the reasons for a fucking opinion is literally so stupid I can't help it, not at all. I realised something lately, people are used to story's where the MC is a fucking godlike being who always seems to do the "logical" thing, but also, the so called "logical" solution is ALWAYS so fucking stupid and unreasonable that tge readers are somewhat brainwashed into believing it. About your so called first "point" which is that he threw a golden opportunity to train because he was looking for a shortcut : This "point" just throws the fact that the protagonist is a teenager, who is also the son of a meager guard who had no prior education into his life but was also told about the feats of mages all over the world, right out of the fucking window, the whole fucking reason this novel was considered good is because the MC has something that I only saw in a handful of story's in this website (definitely not in one of your favorites) and that is : Flaws, the mc's personnality is clearly not perfect in anyway, but its human, you can get the emotion behind his actions, per example, this novel is the only one which has the mc getting arrogant after his aqucisition of a huge amout of money, I didnt see that in a ny other story in webnovel, and about all that destruction realm **** that you've been spouting, why the **** does it have to be unique ? I mean what was your fucking reasoning about the fact that his destruction realm was "only" rare was a disappointment, and that **** about talent, ooh boy do you even read ? Does being able to fight against masters sound like a lack of talent ? Well if so then its because its not.
His realm is what define him, is what caused him ti take the path he had and what caused all the intial trouble. It's also in the title, however this has been completely abandoned for the first 100+ chapters, he didnt even try to build suspance or anything similar. The shortcut I mentioned, I only said it was stupid because he clearly knew there may have been problem and risk, but he still took it. It was a stupid gamble that any person not retarded wouldnt have taken, it's not a flaw. It's just stupid but he still decided to take it. He doesnt seem to have anything special or that define him till when I stopped reading, and dont say "You have to read further". If a story takes more than 100chp to become interesting than it's not worth it. It looks like I was reading a random side character's story. I dont ask him to be OP, but at least have something that make you think he is the MC not a random guy of the story (and luck doesnt count). He simply have nothing interesting. Interesting doesnt means OP, interesting means interesting. Go read the Supreme Magus.
He doesn't have anything interesting ? Again, stupid. You have just forgone the majority of my reply which was showcasing xhat is truly interesting about the MC, to say that he's not interesting, without any proof. Now, about the realm of destruction, while it is true that it is important, but I wouldnt go as far as saying it's what defines the MC, I can think of so many novels, where their defining quality, only comes into play at least halfway into the story. Now, I'm gonna go at you personnaly because right after you say "don't tell me to read past chapter 100" You go on to tell me to read another novel (Which I already checked out, and dropped it into the first 20 chapters) so please, next time you use your twisted common sense, make sure you go by it too
He doesn't have anything interesting ? Again, stupid. You have just forgone the majority of my reply which was showcasing xhat is truly interesting about the MC, to say that he's not interesting, without any proof. Now, about the realm of destruction, while it is true that it is important, but I wouldnt go as far as saying it's what defines the MC, I can think of so many novels, where their defining quality, only comes into play at least halfway into the story. Now, I'm gonna go at you personnaly because right after you say "don't tell me to read past chapter 100" You go on to tell me to read another novel (Which I already checked out, and dropped it into the first 20 chapters) so please, next time you use your twisted common sense, make sure you go by it too
oof yall look like kids, its a book you are both allowed to dislike anything. there is no need for this r/iamverysmart nonsence. you both have clearly different intrests so arguing the point is useless. like me for example i wont read wuxia novels unless its got body cultivation because otherwise i find the whole book to be a bore.
Then what's the use of reviewing? Do we just eliminate all bad review simply because "If u dont like just stop reading". This is called criticism and it's my point of view of the story
You read very few chapters to (in my opinion) assess the story properly. An imperfect MC leaves room for growth as opposed to being 'naturally sharp' from the get-go due to plot armor. Everything related to the forbidden realm is revealed in detail much later with perfect tie-ins to previous events and I won't spoil it aside from saying that it's far from weak.
You dropped Supreme Magus in the first 20 chapters That's retarded cause you're missing a lot
Theres actually personality developement in this novel, the MC starts like a dimwitted country boy who doesnt know sh*t, by now he already changed