Thank you for your Review👍🏽

The review is very in-depth and highly helpful.

Your review help me avoid a disaster coming 😵

Maybe you should give it a try :D. All that was written based on my preferences.

I'm one of those people where if I don't like mc, I can't enjoy the story. And being dumb is not of the qualities that makes me enjoy mc's unless it's in a full misunderstanding and comedy series. I gave this a try, and I said goodbye.

Comedies are another story altogether:p

Thanks man, i was gonna read it cause the tag said Fantasy and not Eastern Fantasy. But what's the point if the perso and plot are the same?

He's a kid. Early 20s. Lacks patience, and his choices show it. He's not used to thinking in terms of centuries of life. Sees the initial benefits of Body Refinement, because he's used to physical fighting. Eventually sees the benefit of magic, and begins putting more effort into it. Eventually finds out what his forbidden realm is, and how it's helped him so far. Did you want him to go from nothing to a Paragon of Destruction within just a few months, or just a couple years? True advancement takes longer than that.

You make some decent points about how he is fine with the slow body refinement improvements, but always wants shortcuts with magic. That is something I did not pick up on.... I think that gets a bit better in the current chapters... but right now the main focus is still body refinement.

i dont know havent touched the book after that chapter i left so i cant give any opinion.

That's a loss. I too gave up at first but having come back a year later I picked it up,restarted it and went through all the frustrating things the mc did. And am happy I didn't stop because this book develops in ways you can't comprehend if you read to the current chapter(394) you won't regret it.

You're viewing from your perspective A LOT !!! I was honestly shocked when I read this , you're really dumb enough to think everything from your perspective . You're a coward, yet you think characters in novel should do the same ! What would you say when there really are problems with the novel no matter what perspective is taken, I really look forward to that.

I love how people think that if you dont go and fight and take some time to train u become a coward with a snap of fingers. You can see the age of people when they write :D. Anyway its ur opinion so not gonna interfere.

Might be man but chinese plot where there is always the same bull. gets tiring. If you have any good suggestions i will be happy to look at them.

i didnt want him to go from 0-100 from the start. I just pointed out why doesnt he train before he acts like a little kid. taking fights with people that are absurdly powerful and his teacher gets killed. what would it cost him if he trained out of the curious eyes for 1-2 years than ponder on which place to go without a single outcome.

I am not criticizing that way , it was just an example of how viewing it from only one perspective. I am only complaining based on how the person I complained against is only viewing from only his perspective and complaining. Well , for example goku , he only cares for his training , so putting another person's perspective is dumb. Sometimes , there are illogical problems , I don't think it happens too much in this novel , only the fact mc gets into too many troubles and is also lucky in gaining benefits . Maybe the fact he gets into trouble a lot and reaches pinnacle easily is what it means by paragon of destruction

I am not criticizing that way , it was just an example of how viewing it from only one perspective. I am only complaining based on how the person I complained against is only viewing from only his perspective and complaining. Well , for example goku , he only cares for his training , so putting another person's perspective is dumb. Sometimes , there are illogical problems , I don't think it happens too much in this novel , only the fact mc gets into too many troubles and is also lucky in gaining benefits . Maybe the fact he gets into trouble a lot and reaches pinnacle easily is what it means by paragon of destruction

Yes the perspective has a lot to do. + the time we watched goku we were kids so we believed everything and nothing seemed out of place but now we find faults in nearly everything. What i meant in my review is more or less the following "why be someone chess piece when u can just train a little and not have everyone hunt you and in the period get your closed ones killed when as seen in the world u can just take a few years that in that world seems like a fragment of month or less to us and get a grasp of your abilities" i never wanted him to have a full plot armor from the start but repeated actions of same and same things with exact same outcome gets boring after a while. I have not read more than the time when i last wrote the review so i cant tell what happened later.

True ...what you said is all true ! Sometimes taking action is always good, not good,we don't know . That incident where master zhao told arran to run and come back later when it's safe , was something what you mentioned but he was just beginning to step into the world . Other time he gave away his dragon ruin power to that woman , it's at times like these you need to adjust ....with the mc. Sometimes you really can't adjust , like I said it's an illogical perspective. Arran always has been type of a warrior taking action always , true he can retreat , but sometimes it's always good to take action first .I am just saying this because there were other novels where action doesn't give any excuse for for the mc to keep getting in trouble illogically. Oh yes , if someone recommends you to read Cowling Dragon, worst mistake I ever did believing reviews . The novel is exactly what you mentioned. Anyway we have different opinions , for me you were just thinking in ..., yes let's say , I retreat and grow stronger later, but some other time mc is a battle maniac who just goes and battles ,arran is something between these two. Else , we won't be able to see where he is so focused when training , especially last chapter. /*Anyway end of discussion , what use is there I further arguing , let's just say we have different opinions.*/ NOTE: There are some grammar mistakes as I just gone with the flow and typed , excuse it.

True ...what you said is all true ! Sometimes taking action is always good, not good,we don't know . That incident where master zhao told arran to run and come back later when it's safe , was something what you mentioned but he was just beginning to step into the world . Other time he gave away his dragon ruin power to that woman , it's at times like these you need to adjust ....with the mc. Sometimes you really can't adjust , like I said it's an illogical perspective. Arran always has been type of a warrior taking action always , true he can retreat , but sometimes it's always good to take action first .I am just saying this because there were other novels where action doesn't give any excuse for for the mc to keep getting in trouble illogically. Oh yes , if someone recommends you to read Cowling Dragon, worst mistake I ever did believing reviews . The novel is exactly what you mentioned. Anyway we have different opinions , for me you were just thinking in ..., yes let's say , I retreat and grow stronger later, but some other time mc is a battle maniac who just goes and battles ,arran is something between these two. Else , we won't be able to see where he is so focused when training , especially last chapter. /*Anyway end of discussion , what use is there I further arguing , let's just say we have different opinions.*/ NOTE: There are some grammar mistakes as I just gone with the flow and typed , excuse it.