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AzureWolf
AzureWolfLv55yr
2019-09-03 02:02

This story had promise. When I started reading this I expected somewhere along the lines of actual Mages training and honing on their respective realms and then eventually fuse or enhance the realms. The start of the novel was great up until the girl decided she wanted to tag along. I was fine with this to an extent until the author had to force the MC out of gaining experience from traveling in the wilderness. The author then inserted some stupid decisions that made some important figure help him on deaths door after a dumb conflict that could have been avoided. after that the MC just starting a training montage for a long time...again. What really made me quit this novel is when I realized after he went strolling through a city the whole story devolved into a ****ty xianxia novel With the retarded MC being overprotective of woman and angry noble sons because of MC interfering. I expected more but I guess I should not expect too much on this kind of site. The girl that tags along the MC just ruins the novel. The problem is not having a girl tag along. THE problem is how to author presented her. It's like the author is trying so hard to make her a ML but fails at it way too much.

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SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

Spoiler.... That girl didn't stick around long. I also thought that she was going to be around for a long time and got frustrated with that character.

PhantomFeaRce
PhantomFeaRceLv13

Yeah. Coz author deletes every side characters. This author might as well stop writings novels. A piece of garbage

SorcererCat:Spoiler.... That girl didn't stick around long. I also thought that she was going to be around for a long time and got frustrated with that character.
ch4kz
ch4kzLv1

I love the story, but I actually agree with this mediocre review. His reaction to that scene made no sense whatsoever. I try to chalk it up to his ignorance and naivety... but it was cringey and way to white mighty for me.

ch4kz
ch4kzLv1

I agree that some side characters dont last too long. But if you were on a solo journey... let's say backpacking through europe, SE asian or south america solo fir 6 months. Friends and new people would come and go every few weeks. This is basically what is happening here. The MC is on a journey. When he is in one location for a while he makes connections, but when he leaves and stuff happens where a permanent party cant be formed...that's life. How many friends have come and gone in life since we were young? sports teams or gaming guilds or clans that have dissolved due to people just moving onto the next stage of life.... I agree its frustrating at times that many characters seem lost, but I dont think they are lost forever... arcs will converge when the MC reaches the end of the continent and starts to circle back.

PhantomFeaRce:Yeah. Coz author deletes every side characters. This author might as well stop writings novels. A piece of garbage
ch4kz
ch4kzLv1

white knight*

ch4kz:I love the story, but I actually agree with this mediocre review. His reaction to that scene made no sense whatsoever. I try to chalk it up to his ignorance and naivety... but it was cringey and way to white mighty for me.
StrangerDanger
StrangerDangerLv13

Nah, I'd say it reflects reality. Rarely do we hold hands with our freinds for the rest of our lives. Everyone normally moves on and one day they will probably meet again. That's just how life works. **. I've read your review, I thought it was laughable.

PhantomFeaRce:Yeah. Coz author deletes every side characters. This author might as well stop writings novels. A piece of garbage
StrangerDanger
StrangerDangerLv13

You were right at the end of your review. There are a lot of angry nobel sons, and we never see Arran go into life and death battles against chicks.

PhantomFeaRce:Yeah. Coz author deletes every side characters. This author might as well stop writings novels. A piece of garbage
OhCommon
OhCommonLv3

Basically this universe's version of arrogant young masters.

StrangerDanger:You were right at the end of your review. There are a lot of angry nobel sons, and we never see Arran go into life and death battles against chicks.
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