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2019-07-15 06:15

The characters. Ah yes, the characters. It frustrates me to no end that we have such a dumb MC. Every. Single, Fucking. Time. He always chooses the worse option. Always does something unnecessary. Always. That’s why I’m dropping this novel. Though the writing itself is good.

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ch4kz
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I love the story and I agree with your critique, but I think that is part of his character growth... As the story goes one he no longer makes the dumb decisions he did in the first half of the story. That being said... his character development in terms of shedding his ignorance and naivety is excrutiatlingly slow. It takes him a long time start to make the right decisions. I was able to push through it bc I enjoyed other parts. But I see why it is frustrating....

haakuman
haakumanLv4

lol no one want to see a person make dumb decisions over and over again. Sure it can be used for character growth but like half the novel is just excessive. Just shows how much of an idiot Mc is to not change while continually making bad decisions. Thx for review now I can save myself from lots of frustrations and 1 star reviews

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