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Bisneto
BisnetoLv46yr
2019-02-05 21:26

DO NOT READ THIS FANFIC unless you're already prepared to be disapointed. Story's great up to around chapter 70, then it crashes and burns. MC's personality does almost a complete 180 spin from his usual calculist, cautious and rational, to rash, irrational and berserker. The ABSOLUTE WORST PART is that at chapter 89 the author decides to insert another trasmigrator who has all the knowledge of all spells, just to give a bull**** enemy for MC. Author's already made it pretty clear that he doesn't care about the reader's opinion. I wanted to give 1 Star because of time wasted, but his writting quality isn't bad and his update stability is regular. Seriously though, don't waste your time on this story.

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Wakanda42
Wakanda42Lv4

So I agree that the beginning of volume 2 was a little slow compared to volume one but I don’t say why giving him a antagonist who is also a transmigrator is necessarily a bad thing. He changed the HP world to much after the first year so the butterfly effect would have already completely changed the future. Also his growth of strength is to fast so unless you severely weaken him then the original HP villains will have no chance against him. Now I personally would have preferred him expand the world instead of just inserting another transmigrator but with him doing so you can give him a backstory and a consistent threat that can stay with him for the entire series. Also it can easily explain why he is so strong, he was gifted with strength do it can lead as an easy plot device to explain why he is op. You don’t like the new antagonist but do you think Voldemort will be a threat and to him by his seventh year? He already is taking over his forces.

GreatOverlord
GreatOverlordLv5

I dropped it because of harem and the way it was going not my cup of tea

GreatOverlord
GreatOverlordLv5

I dropped it because of harem and the way it was going not my cup of tea

iTride
iTrideLv6

The harem is not bad tho.. I like how the Author builds up the relationship between the MC and the girls but its slightly weird because they are just bunch of 11 years old. Or am I just.. jealous.. God please make me Reincarnate or Transmigrate! (With a system of course *winks*)

GreatOverlord:I dropped it because of harem and the way it was going not my cup of tea
GreatOverlord
GreatOverlordLv5

Well itsnnotnmy cup of tea so I just dropped it, and also harems isn't my fav even the more reason to drop it more

iTride:The harem is not bad tho.. I like how the Author builds up the relationship between the MC and the girls but its slightly weird because they are just bunch of 11 years old. Or am I just.. jealous.. God please make me Reincarnate or Transmigrate! (With a system of course *winks*)
Lucy_Carla
Lucy_CarlaLv4

Yea... another transmigrator it turn me off and ruin the mood... initialy i hope it have kingdom building with his OPnes and his force...

AwronZizao
AwronZizaoLv10

I agree, the transmigrator was probably the biggest mistake of the story. I love the entirety of it. I really do. However, this story would've been a whole lot better if he was the only transmigrator in the story. He could've made something up like, Grindelwald escaping from Azkaban, maybe a Dark Lord from Merlins era suddenly appeared out of nowhere? Maybe the MC becomes the Dark Lord on the down low? There are a lot of stories that can still be fun as heck whilst the character is ridiculously OP. Such as One Punch Man. This story was giving me similar vibes and it was enjoyable. The transmigrator however, in my own opinion was a whole bunch of floppy-cock. There was no foreshadowing, nothing at all to indicate another migrator. He popped up out of absolutely nowhere and I think that's the biggest reason it pissed everyone off, because you had the main character going around being like 90/100 intelligent stat, making plans and being badass, then all of a sudden. His I.Q fell to 20/100 and he gets caught off guard utterly and completely, with not a single fail-safe in place, just in case. You'd think someone like our main character would've done such things just to make sure, but apparently he's had a dude somehow watching him the entire time from the shadows.

zaped
zapedLv11

I thought it was pretty good except when they introduced a trans but with a chunni letter

Runa
RunaLv4

Why do all of you hate another transmigrator? In my opinion it was well planned and I was thrilled with the antagonists character development. We also likely will soon find out why MC reincarnated with that god foreshadowing. I’m also not a fan of harems but author wrote it pretty well so why complain? Besides, it’s author’s fantasy, not yours. If you really dislike it or find unbearable just stop reading and don’t worsen the mood of those who like it.

Seud
SeudLv4

Well planned? Do you even know what that means? That was not well planned at all, that was the author just slapping something into the story out of nowhere, where was the planning, was there even a tiny bit of foreshadowing to another transmigrated? No there wasn’t, hence the amount of hate the author is getting and how his story dropped in the rankings like jumping off of a diving board.

Runa:Why do all of you hate another transmigrator? In my opinion it was well planned and I was thrilled with the antagonists character development. We also likely will soon find out why MC reincarnated with that god foreshadowing. I’m also not a fan of harems but author wrote it pretty well so why complain? Besides, it’s author’s fantasy, not yours. If you really dislike it or find unbearable just stop reading and don’t worsen the mood of those who like it.
Seud
SeudLv4

It’s also funny you’re telling people to essentially not comment their opinions of the story because somehow it’ll ruin the experience for you. How would that even happen? Unless you’re incredibly sensitive for no reason.

Runa:Why do all of you hate another transmigrator? In my opinion it was well planned and I was thrilled with the antagonists character development. We also likely will soon find out why MC reincarnated with that god foreshadowing. I’m also not a fan of harems but author wrote it pretty well so why complain? Besides, it’s author’s fantasy, not yours. If you really dislike it or find unbearable just stop reading and don’t worsen the mood of those who like it.
Shen_Yoru
Shen_YoruLv5

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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

A second transmigrator?? Thank you for the heads up!!! Every fic that does that is a 1/5 trash fic so Thank you

DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Idiot

Runa:Why do all of you hate another transmigrator? In my opinion it was well planned and I was thrilled with the antagonists character development. We also likely will soon find out why MC reincarnated with that god foreshadowing. I’m also not a fan of harems but author wrote it pretty well so why complain? Besides, it’s author’s fantasy, not yours. If you really dislike it or find unbearable just stop reading and don’t worsen the mood of those who like it.
Runa
RunaLv4

Wow, such an informative and logical answer, you have such a rich vocabulary. Truly impressive(not)

DaoistyQNGiX:Idiot
Overdrive_again
Overdrive_againLv2

I donno how to thank you, but you saved me

M7TH1C
M7TH1CLv14

I dropped becaue of the transmigrator dude.

No_1_islookin
No_1_islookinLv4

oh you have me at writer si another person

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