Shameless auth.....................................................................................too bored to write the rest, you get it don't you

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Initial chapters are interesting and well written. Plot thereafter seems to have stalled with rather desperate attempts to throw together some clichés and the quality has declined.

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This is an interesting turn of events with the Harry Potterverse. I have enjoyed the story so far, but I would highly suggest getting someone to edit your chapters before posting. Heck, if you had pre-written chapters I would be glad to edit some of the chapters for you myself. As I said, the story is interesting and I like how in tune you have been with the legitimate story of Harry Potter, sometimes even down to what characters say. My biggest struggle reading it is the terrible grammar (Yes, I do realize this is noted in the synopsis, but this is still an Literary work. The lack of grammar really takes me out of the world your story creates). Like I said, I've been looking to get into editing regardless so I would be happy to dive into it for this story and fix the chapters. Thanks for the chapters! I look forward to seeing future posts.

This is not for Harry Potter fans. It's nominally set in the Wizarding World, but turns Draco into the hero. That was the original concept, and it seemed to have been well executed when the author stuck to rewriting scenes from the books. However recent chapters show a tendency to blabber without going anywhere, and the quality of writing has dropped drastically.

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I like this novel so far. Harry Potter will always be a long time favorite of mine and I feel like the author plays with the characters really well. When I first started reading this I didn’t know what to expect, but I have been pleasantly surprised with the foundation that is being laid down for future plot, makes me excited for what comes next.

Well I have been reading this fan fic since its inception. The story is quite original and interesting. His work is a bit puristic as in he hasnt added stuff like sharingan or cultivation or what not into this. I quite appreaciate this. There has been no mention of the fight with voldemort as of yet, but still it has had a lot of very good content. Just imagining how good it will be as we move on to the main plotline keep me anticipating and wanting mass releases all the time. The author is quite witty. Comes up with these ideas, multiple ones at that, whether they be small, big, impactful to the storyline or not, they all have added to the overall appeal of his work. Its very genuine, ingenious and worth every moment i spent reading. Hope this wont be dropped. Best fanfic on webnovel according to me!!