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Ight, as much as I like Raven- These mf’s gotta stop or Ricky gotta stop them. Enough manga’s and novels have told me that ‘factions’ within large harems never end well (ESPECIALLY when one of the children will inherit the ‘kingdom’).

This Is kinda annoying for me tbh (It’s not something that affects the story in anyway, nor does it make it worse because as I learn about writing via YouTube and other sources I came across things that make a story bad and one of those things is a ‘throwaway’ character (Where they are purposely made bland, and ‘normal’ so that the author can throw them away. Now once again, this doesn’t affect your story in anyway since it’s not really a main character, but It’s also- I don’t know where I’m going with this and this comment is already long enough so I’ma go back to reading the chapter 👍

Would’ve been cool to see both kids that Ricky choose not to meet have powers so In the future they might ‘lose control’ or ‘be exposed’ and would meet and bond In some way (But this is good too since they’ll never appear again lmao).

Did Charles figure out that Ricky might be the father?

Author be like-

By Chill_Ean- something something? I wanna make sure I found the right one

If you want to write it then do. However I would HIGHLY suggest finishing this story first or else you might become an author that never finishes stories. Also If you enjoy writing it then you definitely should.