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AcexChaosx
AcexChaosxLv156yr
2018-12-05 00:10

This is an interesting turn of events with the Harry Potterverse. I have enjoyed the story so far, but I would highly suggest getting someone to edit your chapters before posting. Heck, if you had pre-written chapters I would be glad to edit some of the chapters for you myself. As I said, the story is interesting and I like how in tune you have been with the legitimate story of Harry Potter, sometimes even down to what characters say. My biggest struggle reading it is the terrible grammar (Yes, I do realize this is noted in the synopsis, but this is still an Literary work. The lack of grammar really takes me out of the world your story creates). Like I said, I've been looking to get into editing regardless so I would be happy to dive into it for this story and fix the chapters. Thanks for the chapters! I look forward to seeing future posts.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin

Sonet
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199 Chs

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AcexChaosx
AcexChaosxLv15

xChaos Seedx#8428

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AcexChaosx
AcexChaosxLv15

There does need to be a space between Chaos and Seed though! (: If you'd like, I would be willing to work on your older chapters first, just so you know I'm not trying to take your work or anything lol Just need you to message me on Discord so I can share what I finish back to you.

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I_am_low_profile
I_am_low_profileLv5

(Yes, I do realize this is noted in the synopsis, but this is still "AN LITERARY" work. --you may have missed this, but before volunteering to edit grammar, you should first try to double check yours...(not trying to insult or whatever 'cuz we need volunteers here for the sake of good grammar hehehehe hope you don't mind)

AcexChaosx:xChaos Seedx#8428
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IPreferLonerMc
IPreferLonerMcLv5

That’s how I scammed people in roblox 😂😂

AcexChaosx:There does need to be a space between Chaos and Seed though! (: If you'd like, I would be willing to work on your older chapters first, just so you know I'm not trying to take your work or anything lol Just need you to message me on Discord so I can share what I finish back to you.
5yr
IPreferLonerMc
IPreferLonerMcLv5

That’s how I scammed people in roblox 😂😂

AcexChaosx:There does need to be a space between Chaos and Seed though! (: If you'd like, I would be willing to work on your older chapters first, just so you know I'm not trying to take your work or anything lol Just need you to message me on Discord so I can share what I finish back to you.
5yr
Ancient_
Ancient_Lv14

Do you know any other Harry Potter fanfic with an evil or ruthless MC?

5yr
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Ancient_
Ancient_Lv14

Do you know any other Harry Potter fanfic with an evil or ruthless MC?

I_am_low_profile:(Yes, I do realize this is noted in the synopsis, but this is still "AN LITERARY" work. --you may have missed this, but before volunteering to edit grammar, you should first try to double check yours...(not trying to insult or whatever 'cuz we need volunteers here for the sake of good grammar hehehehe hope you don't mind)
5yr
I_am_low_profile
I_am_low_profileLv5

lol~ no unfortunately.... i don't read harry potter fanfic, i just accidentally stumbled here~ hahahahaha

Ancient_:Do you know any other Harry Potter fanfic with an evil or ruthless MC?
5yr
Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4

The Grammer is the issue. Anything else is perfect

4yr
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Shameless auth.....................................................................................too bored to write the rest, you get it don't you

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Initial chapters are interesting and well written. Plot thereafter seems to have stalled with rather desperate attempts to throw together some clichés and the quality has declined.

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It's very hard to find a good Harry potter fanfic. I like this one. It's good. It's not all about Harry and friends, but our M.C. Keep it up. We need more chapters.

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This is not for Harry Potter fans. It's nominally set in the Wizarding World, but turns Draco into the hero. That was the original concept, and it seemed to have been well executed when the author stuck to rewriting scenes from the books. However recent chapters show a tendency to blabber without going anywhere, and the quality of writing has dropped drastically.

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renokana
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I like this novel so far. Harry Potter will always be a long time favorite of mine and I feel like the author plays with the characters really well. When I first started reading this I didn’t know what to expect, but I have been pleasantly surprised with the foundation that is being laid down for future plot, makes me excited for what comes next.

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Hyperion007
Hyperion007Lv13

Well I have been reading this fan fic since its inception. The story is quite original and interesting. His work is a bit puristic as in he hasnt added stuff like sharingan or cultivation or what not into this. I quite appreaciate this. There has been no mention of the fight with voldemort as of yet, but still it has had a lot of very good content. Just imagining how good it will be as we move on to the main plotline keep me anticipating and wanting mass releases all the time. The author is quite witty. Comes up with these ideas, multiple ones at that, whether they be small, big, impactful to the storyline or not, they all have added to the overall appeal of his work. Its very genuine, ingenious and worth every moment i spent reading. Hope this wont be dropped. Best fanfic on webnovel according to me!!

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