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ghjiutrvb66Lv36yr
2018-10-21 11:38

It's a fanfiction to begin with. If you hate it because it's not to your liking, why even bother to leave a trashy review. Heck, give the author props for even sharing his version of Naruto. Consider it trash? Then go make your own version and see how others see yours. Hopefully you don't go and kill yourself because of how many trash you've received.

Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]

BrightDawn
4.0
145 Chs

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Craiberk
CraiberkLv11

A review serves multiple purposes, from letting the author know what went wrong, which particular part of the story was contraversial, to notifying you and me that a novel has it's potential downsides. If you happen to be of the same mindset as the reviewer, you'll save yourself some time skipping the process of discovering how a story is not to your liking. In my opinion critique is much more valuable form of feedback than praise. Saying to not leave negative reviews is asinine. I am much more upset with all the pointless 5-star reviews of people either spamming random characters for the sake of farming pointless exp or going "I didn't read it, but it's in my favorite universe so I'm giving it 5 stars!" polluting this site. Furthermore, I find the statement of "why don't you make something better before criticizing someone else's work" to be idiotic to the extreme. It doesn't take the ability to create to find flaws in someone else's creation. It's like you get served rotten food in the restraunt and then getting "Hey! Why don't you go to a culinary school for half a decade and then work in a restraunt for two before you get to criticize my work?!" No, it doesn't work that way. You are spending a limited resource in the form of money (or time reading novel) and if you are served trash, you should be entitled to let people know. And no amount of "I'm a creator" is relevant. Not trashing the novel here, btw, just your bad ideas on how feedback and discourse should function.

4yr
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SageOfSins
SageOfSinsLv3

damn bro you tell them!! I am also bit disgusted by this site's polluted condition of how every fucking bitch whine when critics are being point out... Like really, the Fanfic collection's on this site has reach an level better describe as 'six feet under' because of spammers and readers that just are satisfied with rectum-passed shit of Fanfic. can't this idiots really show appreciation for some of rarer gems of literatured Fanfics than spamming for Harem or shouting for +18 contents like really? I like a fanfic of NSFW genre but this site's level of English may traumatize my taste for +18 content.

Craiberk:A review serves multiple purposes, from letting the author know what went wrong, which particular part of the story was contraversial, to notifying you and me that a novel has it's potential downsides. If you happen to be of the same mindset as the reviewer, you'll save yourself some time skipping the process of discovering how a story is not to your liking. In my opinion critique is much more valuable form of feedback than praise. Saying to not leave negative reviews is asinine. I am much more upset with all the pointless 5-star reviews of people either spamming random characters for the sake of farming pointless exp or going "I didn't read it, but it's in my favorite universe so I'm giving it 5 stars!" polluting this site. Furthermore, I find the statement of "why don't you make something better before criticizing someone else's work" to be idiotic to the extreme. It doesn't take the ability to create to find flaws in someone else's creation. It's like you get served rotten food in the restraunt and then getting "Hey! Why don't you go to a culinary school for half a decade and then work in a restraunt for two before you get to criticize my work?!" No, it doesn't work that way. You are spending a limited resource in the form of money (or time reading novel) and if you are served trash, you should be entitled to let people know. And no amount of "I'm a creator" is relevant. Not trashing the novel here, btw, just your bad ideas on how feedback and discourse should function.
4yr
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ChrolloDancho
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I'm sorry but this isn't Naruto... MC help Kushina and Minato to survive nine tails attack when he wasn't even 1... If you want to make your MC OP at least make him grow, an baby MC OP should not exist. And your system is too ridiculous, it isn't fun to read a story where the MC is a walking cheat like this. And the last thing I have to say is that when I read a Naruto Fanfiction I expect to see power that come from that world not some overly cheated power that could be on random chinese xianxia.

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HDDreyar
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Well the start of the story was great, I guess until he put a limiter on the mc and the encounter with danzo, well let's just say that it "killed the mood" of the story. Its not even an overpowered mc as he has a limiter and! HE DOESN'T EVEN FIGHT!!!!!!! The fight scenes last for more or less HALF a chapter. Its quite boring honestly.

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_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4

Chapter 21 was the last chapter I read. This novel had a lot of potential and I was very impressed by all the original ideas, but then author made M.C. too overpowered and he began to get 'scared' of his own power. M.C even bought something from system that restrains his powers. Not to mention the fact that M.C is acting like a typical japanese protagonist - Sissy* and n*aive. I gave up on this novel. And with that, I change my ratings to the minimum.

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Reveal spoiler

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Crow_OF_Judgement
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Read till chapter 71. Here is the review. Writing quality: nice Character: cliche mc who would do anything for the person they slightly bond with. Story Development: Ok How I feel about the novel: Not good for me. Mc's that help anyone and everyone that they bond with is very annoying. The main character just acts like the typical Japanese anime main character with just being a little more merciless.

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Reimoss
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I hope this is good. After novels about Inuzuka and Hyuga, I was expecting something like this. . . . . . I still do not know why I need 140 characters to be able to post this.

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Dumbgum
DumbgumLv4

Stupid fucking limiter my ass. Its a good story until that part. If you dont want your mc too be OP just let him climb his way from bottom to top.

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AldiXanana
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so far so good and the idea of the mc is born as the brother of chouji is pretty interesting i hope the author will release more chapter and can improve his writing style, also please release more chapter in the future and dont make the mc op to fast it will ruin your story later and becareful towards the harem route if u will add it later cause it will be sad if another good potential novel ruin because of the opness and haremm

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Mike_Lu
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The plot is full of holes. The writing is not as bad as other fanfic here but some logic is very pathetic. Not to mention the fact the formatting is horrendous

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