I'm sorry but this isn't Naruto... MC help Kushina and Minato to survive nine tails attack when he wasn't even 1... If you want to make your MC OP at least make him grow, an baby MC OP should not exist. And your system is too ridiculous, it isn't fun to read a story where the MC is a walking cheat like this. And the last thing I have to say is that when I read a Naruto Fanfiction I expect to see power that come from that world not some overly cheated power that could be on random chinese xianxia.
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LIKEWell, I respect your opinion and I glad that you gave my novel a three star even though you dislike it. But, if may be so bold as to defend my novleroni, I think I'm letting him grow despite his OPness and the system; I mean, it says you've read up to Chapter 22 so you should be aware of how he's changed. P.S. I like your DxD work :)
The story itself is well written and have a lot chapters (contrary to mine lol), it's just that I can't enjoy these type of stories but it's just my personal thinking so it isn't really relevant. Anyway good luck man. ** : im glad you enjoyed, sorry for the lack of chapter by the way :)
BrightDawn:Well, I respect your opinion and I glad that you gave my novel a three star even though you dislike it. But, if may be so bold as to defend my novleroni, I think I'm letting him grow despite his OPness and the system; I mean, it says you've read up to Chapter 22 so you should be aware of how he's changed. P.S. I like your DxD work :)
AND THIS IS THE COMMENT OF A MAN WHO WRITES A BOOK ABOUT SERIAL RAPIST-MURDERER-THIEF-BRAINLESS DICKHEAD CUNT WHICH AFTER 3 HOURS HAS PASSED 5 STAGES OF CULTIVATION? WHO STOLE IT FROM THE MAN AND MADE HIM WATCH AS HE RAPES HIS WOMEN AND SISTERS.( YOU'RE THE WORST PERSON ON THE PLANET AND YOUR SINS FROM WRITING THAT BOOK COMPARABLE TO HITLER
It was an illusion didn't you understand ?
zaiziua:AND THIS IS THE COMMENT OF A MAN WHO WRITES A BOOK ABOUT SERIAL RAPIST-MURDERER-THIEF-BRAINLESS DICKHEAD CUNT WHICH AFTER 3 HOURS HAS PASSED 5 STAGES OF CULTIVATION? WHO STOLE IT FROM THE MAN AND MADE HIM WATCH AS HE RAPES HIS WOMEN AND SISTERS.( YOU'RE THE WORST PERSON ON THE PLANET AND YOUR SINS FROM WRITING THAT BOOK COMPARABLE TO HITLER
Dude you make yun chen look like a saint. He raped 2 women in the story and killed 7 million innocent people in his past life by poisoning them. Also did you read the book when he amputated a guys limbs and destroyed his senses and let him live like a vegetable? If hes a saint the devil must be god.
zaiziua:the very concept that the main character forced a person to go through such a disgusting( without much on the top reasons)
There's is no ridiculous on his system idiot.. Try to watch japanese anime or the novel of DEATH MARCH KARA HAJIMARU ISEKAI KYOUSETSU on how OP the MC's system there, And also if you say that a baby MC does not exist try to watch the beezlebub japanese anime on how the MC baby beezlebub make a conctract with mortal fighting with demon and gods alongside with his contractor
Exp. I my self hate Yun Che
Nydre:Dude you make yun chen look like a saint. He raped 2 women in the story and killed 7 million innocent people in his past life by poisoning them. Also did you read the book when he amputated a guys limbs and destroyed his senses and let him live like a vegetable? If hes a saint the devil must be god.