Item: Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]
Rating: 1
Author: _EMI_

_EMI_Lv46yr

2018-10-13 22:08

Chapter 21 was the last chapter I read. This novel had a lot of potential and I was very impressed by all the original ideas, but then author made M.C. too overpowered and he began to get 'scared' of his own power. M.C even bought something from system that restrains his powers. Not to mention the fact that M.C is acting like a typical japanese protagonist - Sissy* and n*aive. I gave up on this novel. And with that, I change my ratings to the minimum.

Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]

BrightDawn

4.0

145 Chs

Liked by 18 people

Replies7

_EMI_Lv4

Not to mention all that Danzo bull****. Why would M.C restrain his power in that fight.?? It's just stupid.!!

6yr

BrightDawnAuthor

The Limiter restrained his power in that fight. And the limiter situation... it "improves" in a couple chapters~ I see a lot of people didn't like the little "oh crap! this is serious..." moment, so I'll try to avoid a similar development in future chapters. However, I won't chance the chapters I've already published as that would destroy the purpose of this novel; being practice for me~

_EMI_:Not to mention all that Danzo bull****. Why would M.C restrain his power in that fight.?? It's just stupid.!!

6yr

BrightDawnAuthor

... I wont *change* ...

_EMI_:Not to mention all that Danzo bull****. Why would M.C restrain his power in that fight.?? It's just stupid.!!

6yr

_EMI_Lv4

I don't want you to change anything... Just remember from now on.. is all I'm saying.!

BrightDawn:... I wont *change* ...

6yr

MortiferLv14

Daaamn. Good thing i read the other comments. Hate nerfs

BrightDawn:... I wont *change* ...

6yr

Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

Chap 80+ was where I dropped this novel.. When he went to DxD world and he made riser strong despite trying to r*pe/NTR the mc.

5yr

Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

Chap 80+ was where I dropped this novel.. When he went to DxD world and he made riser strong despite trying to r*pe/NTR the mc.

5yr

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I'm sorry but this isn't Naruto... MC help Kushina and Minato to survive nine tails attack when he wasn't even 1... If you want to make your MC OP at least make him grow, an baby MC OP should not exist. And your system is too ridiculous, it isn't fun to read a story where the MC is a walking cheat like this. And the last thing I have to say is that when I read a Naruto Fanfiction I expect to see power that come from that world not some overly cheated power that could be on random chinese xianxia.

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