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Reimoss
ReimossLv146yr
2018-09-30 10:14

I hope this is good. After novels about Inuzuka and Hyuga, I was expecting something like this. . . . . . I still do not know why I need 140 characters to be able to post this.

Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]

BrightDawn
4.0
145 Chs

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Bugged
BuggedLv4

I want an arubame clan mc

6yr
9
Reimoss
ReimossLv14

That might be quite hard... bug user. This doesn't bring too many ideas. Aside from bug swarms and op bugs I can't think of anything.

Bugged:I want an arubame clan mc
6yr
3
Bugged
BuggedLv4

Imagine elemental bugs

Reimoss:That might be quite hard... bug user. This doesn't bring too many ideas. Aside from bug swarms and op bugs I can't think of anything.
6yr
2
Bugged
BuggedLv4

Isolated by the instinctive disgust and fear of bugs

Reimoss:That might be quite hard... bug user. This doesn't bring too many ideas. Aside from bug swarms and op bugs I can't think of anything.
6yr
Bugged
BuggedLv4

Also everyone looking down on him for the common idea that bugs are weak

Reimoss:That might be quite hard... bug user. This doesn't bring too many ideas. Aside from bug swarms and op bugs I can't think of anything.
6yr
Reimoss
ReimossLv14

I see you like bugs. Do make a fanfiction with an Aburame clan member as the MC and I shall witness your imagination.

6yr
1
Bugged
BuggedLv4

But still limited in tactics, when fighting gara, aoe attacks, and amount of bugs reserved, and chakra to expend on bugs/ninjutsu(elemental bug enchantment)

Reimoss:That might be quite hard... bug user. This doesn't bring too many ideas. Aside from bug swarms and op bugs I can't think of anything.
6yr
Bugged
BuggedLv4

Also sage mode could upgrade the bugs

Reimoss:That might be quite hard... bug user. This doesn't bring too many ideas. Aside from bug swarms and op bugs I can't think of anything.
6yr
Reimoss
ReimossLv14

Now all you have to do is hope for someone to read your ideas and make one if you're not going to. It might be interesting.

6yr
Eternal_Hornbill
Eternal_HornbillLv11

Or transform into half bug, half man. Like Terraformars.

Bugged:Also sage mode could upgrade the bugs
6yr
Bugged
BuggedLv4

That sounds like a better version of Clancy from Ben10

Eternal_Hornbill:Or transform into half bug, half man. Like Terraformars.
6yr
Chaotic_Winter
Chaotic_WinterLv13

Mate can you tell me if there's any harem or romance???

6yr
1
Reimoss
ReimossLv14

There is. Karin and Ino for now.

Chaotic_Winter:Mate can you tell me if there's any harem or romance???
6yr
1
Chaotic_Winter
Chaotic_WinterLv13

so it's a harem?? and does the mc recognise their feeling, don't want to read a dense mc

Reimoss:There is. Karin and Ino for now.
6yr
Reimoss
ReimossLv14

He does eventually. Not in the beginning though... the reason for this was that he was a child. After they graduate, things get better. They have kissed a couple of times.

Chaotic_Winter:so it's a harem?? and does the mc recognise their feeling, don't want to read a dense mc
6yr
Chaotic_Winter
Chaotic_WinterLv13

perfect thank mate, honestly people fear harem because the author tends to mess them up with 1d character, but after listening to you, it seem the author has planned his chapters well so I think they won't be 1D characters

Reimoss:He does eventually. Not in the beginning though... the reason for this was that he was a child. After they graduate, things get better. They have kissed a couple of times.
6yr
2
smoky
smokyLv13

What if the bugs carry viruses or bacteria which are highly infectious?

Reimoss:That might be quite hard... bug user. This doesn't bring too many ideas. Aside from bug swarms and op bugs I can't think of anything.
6yr
Bartzabel
BartzabelLv11

Since the bugs of the Aburame clan live inside of them, the MC could make a huge bug farm for them and release mass swarms to destroy whole planets. Also, have the bug be a special bug made purely out of chakra, and the more they absorb the more powerful they are, and if they can absorb others chakra, they can absorb each other's chakra too, but only by command of their "queen" which can be something starting only as strong as the rest of the bugs, but evolves to be a 10 tails level existence and the MC can be "her" jinchuiki.

Bugged:Also sage mode could upgrade the bugs
6yr
1
Bugged
BuggedLv4

Guess that makes him the king to the queen ‘wink wink’ *assuming that Mc is male*

Bartzabel:Since the bugs of the Aburame clan live inside of them, the MC could make a huge bug farm for them and release mass swarms to destroy whole planets. Also, have the bug be a special bug made purely out of chakra, and the more they absorb the more powerful they are, and if they can absorb others chakra, they can absorb each other's chakra too, but only by command of their "queen" which can be something starting only as strong as the rest of the bugs, but evolves to be a 10 tails level existence and the MC can be "her" jinchuiki.
6yr
Bartzabel
BartzabelLv11

Yeah, MC will be male, and the queen can take human form *winks back*

Bugged:Guess that makes him the king to the queen ‘wink wink’ *assuming that Mc is male*
6yr
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ChrolloDancho
ChrolloDanchoLv4

I'm sorry but this isn't Naruto... MC help Kushina and Minato to survive nine tails attack when he wasn't even 1... If you want to make your MC OP at least make him grow, an baby MC OP should not exist. And your system is too ridiculous, it isn't fun to read a story where the MC is a walking cheat like this. And the last thing I have to say is that when I read a Naruto Fanfiction I expect to see power that come from that world not some overly cheated power that could be on random chinese xianxia.

6yr

HDDreyar
HDDreyarLv5

Well the start of the story was great, I guess until he put a limiter on the mc and the encounter with danzo, well let's just say that it "killed the mood" of the story. Its not even an overpowered mc as he has a limiter and! HE DOESN'T EVEN FIGHT!!!!!!! The fight scenes last for more or less HALF a chapter. Its quite boring honestly.

6yr
anger
angerLv11

Reveal spoiler

6yr
_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4

Chapter 21 was the last chapter I read. This novel had a lot of potential and I was very impressed by all the original ideas, but then author made M.C. too overpowered and he began to get 'scared' of his own power. M.C even bought something from system that restrains his powers. Not to mention the fact that M.C is acting like a typical japanese protagonist - Sissy* and n*aive. I gave up on this novel. And with that, I change my ratings to the minimum.

6yr
Crow_OF_Judgement
Crow_OF_JudgementLv3

Read till chapter 71. Here is the review. Writing quality: nice Character: cliche mc who would do anything for the person they slightly bond with. Story Development: Ok How I feel about the novel: Not good for me. Mc's that help anyone and everyone that they bond with is very annoying. The main character just acts like the typical Japanese anime main character with just being a little more merciless.

6yr
Dumbgum
DumbgumLv4

Stupid fucking limiter my ass. Its a good story until that part. If you dont want your mc too be OP just let him climb his way from bottom to top.

5yr
Sven123
Sven123Lv12

Reveal spoiler

6yr
AldiXanana
AldiXananaLv6

so far so good and the idea of the mc is born as the brother of chouji is pretty interesting i hope the author will release more chapter and can improve his writing style, also please release more chapter in the future and dont make the mc op to fast it will ruin your story later and becareful towards the harem route if u will add it later cause it will be sad if another good potential novel ruin because of the opness and haremm

6yr
Mike_Lu
Mike_LuLv3

The plot is full of holes. The writing is not as bad as other fanfic here but some logic is very pathetic. Not to mention the fact the formatting is horrendous

5yr
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