Review Detail of Vaettir in Lord Shadow
Review detail
I won't comment on the grammar and spelling mistakes, since many have already spoken about it. It's amazing how someone can take a good idea for a very good plot and turn it into such a horrible novel. The romance for the MC and the Female Lead is as dumb as possible. He tries to make it an epic romance, but fails terribly. Either they are apart because the FL is a dumb b*tch, or the are together with the FL whining and complaining about the MC. And the poor bastard just takes it, over and over again. This whole idea is so plain stupid that the MC nearly sacrifices his life for the FL so many times, and the times he needs help she is never around because she needs to be stronger for the MC. What is the point of that if she is never around when he needs it?! On the other hand we have another love interest that practically killed herself to save the MC, that stands by him, supports him, understands him, but NO!! The FL has to be the romance for the MC. It gets so annoying that I find myself wishing the stupid spoiled FL to just die. I honestly think the author must have had a really screwed up relation in his past to think of love as he does. Whatever that is, it's not love, neither here nor in hell!! The characters generally are well written, meaning the are not 2 dimension characters. they have their own backgrounds, reasons, hopes, etc. The issue here is that the author spends as much time writing about the side characters as he spends on the MC. And he keeps on jumping perspectives. One moment we are following the MC doing something important, and then we are watching some non important character doing a monologue about how beautiful the sky is. The time jumping also is a bit too much. Time travelling is supposed to be either impossible or prohibited by the higher powers, but every few chapters we find another time traveler, or someone with memories about the future. The really good parts about this novel is when we are following the MC. He is a decently written character, besides his stupidity in romance and the main love interest. But regarding his "cultivation" an advancement the chapters are pretty interesting. And the challenges he faces are well done as well. Besides correcting the grammar and spelling (FIND AN EDITOR!!) and slowing down the changes of perspectives, all the author would need is a realistic romance or no romance at all and the story would improve drastically...
Lord Shadow
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Lol ngl i thought u were just ****ting on the novel because u found something annoying but u actually had some solid thoughts, while i agree with some of the points you gave isnt the score a bit too low for the novel? After reading so much of it i feel like i can actually get some of the thoughts of the mc. Anyways that was a pretty good criticism on your part gl to ya.
No one has to agree with your inflated score. if anything, his score is sitll too hgih for this novel. Eveyrone ahs their own opinions and they’re each valid to the perosn that aaid them. get over yourself
Milosic:Lol ngl i thought u were just ****ting on the novel because u found something annoying but u actually had some solid thoughts, while i agree with some of the points you gave isnt the score a bit too low for the novel? After reading so much of it i feel like i can actually get some of the thoughts of the mc. Anyways that was a pretty good criticism on your part gl to ya.
Yes everyone has opinions, some are just wrong for others. For me and many others its completely wrong same as for you mine is wrong so stop acting please? K
JPNovelFan:No one has to agree with your inflated score. if anything, his score is sitll too hgih for this novel. Eveyrone ahs their own opinions and they’re each valid to the perosn that aaid them. get over yourself
JPNovelFan:No one has to agree with your inflated score. if anything, his score is sitll too hgih for this novel. Eveyrone ahs their own opinions and they’re each valid to the perosn that aaid them. get over yourself
Milosic:Oh and btw the score i gave it is indeed too little wish i gave it a 5*
JPNovelFan:Youre not the one who wrotE this review so yOu can f off yoU paid shill
idk, I'm just hallucinating here for not sleeping since yesterday. btw did you find what the hell is paid shills?
Milosic::/ this guy has some smooth brain power, also tf is a paid shill
Case and point why I almost always prefer harems/polygamy in webnovels. These guys can write amazing stories with awesome world building, but man I don't think I read a single cultivation novel with great romance focused on monogamy. Most often, it just becomes a contrived romance subplot that detracts from the main story. When its a harem, its a good crutch for the author to avoid contrived and annoying subplots altogether. Is that good writing? no. But as a reader, choosing between the two evils of a contrived monogamous subplot with an MC that will be a virgin for a million years (sometimes literally), or an MC that just does what he wants and collects beautiful women that are usuallu not given fleshed out personalities like a pokemon game... the second option is a lot more fun to read about. I'm more focused on him conquering the world anyways!
harems are never done right and only makes the story wors imo I would rather just have no romance sor anything like that because virgin authors let their fantasies ruin their books
Bartothegreat:Case and point why I almost always prefer harems/polygamy in webnovels. These guys can write amazing stories with awesome world building, but man I don't think I read a single cultivation novel with great romance focused on monogamy. Most often, it just becomes a contrived romance subplot that detracts from the main story. When its a harem, its a good crutch for the author to avoid contrived and annoying subplots altogether. Is that good writing? no. But as a reader, choosing between the two evils of a contrived monogamous subplot with an MC that will be a virgin for a million years (sometimes literally), or an MC that just does what he wants and collects beautiful women that are usuallu not given fleshed out personalities like a pokemon game... the second option is a lot more fun to read about. I'm more focused on him conquering the world anyways!
why would u want to give 5 stars to something that you agree has bad sides to it. Anything less then perfect is not 5 stars, a single complaint no matter how minor means it is nit 5 stars. 5 stars objectively means it can not get any better lol
Milosic:Oh and btw the score i gave it is indeed too little wish i gave it a 5*
U manage to confuse me brodar, I’m now in need of jesūs and da oily fatha for spreading light in myrrh forward.
JPNovelFan:No one has to agree with your inflated score. if anything, his score is sitll too hgih for this novel. Eveyrone ahs their own opinions and they’re each valid to the perosn that aaid them. get over yourself
I’m not sure what he means by “paid” shill, since a shill is someone who is paid to sell something or to participate in an activity in order to persuade others to buy or participate.
Milosic::/ this guy has some smooth brain power, also tf is a paid shill
