Douglas_Henry

Dude, it's okay for the MC to be all that, as long as it's established that he's like that from the beginning, which wasn't the case. The MC's personality changes completely abruptly and irrationally; if the story continues like this, the MC will just become a Nie Li 2.0. Real life is brutal too, and that's why you're going to be an idiot?

This turned into a big mess. In the beginning, he was a peaceful guy who just wanted to live in peace, now he's an ungrateful, manipulative, cold, and calculating person. The author gave him a system, and all he does is take advantage of the people who help him and steal from them. It would have been better if he didn't have any system at all. I gave up on this story.

I get the impression that the protagonist underwent a drastic change in behavior. In the beginning, he was just a lazy and shy guy who wanted a quiet life, and out of nowhere he became a cold, calculating, and manipulative person? This abrupt change makes no sense at all.

What a pointless comparison! The ninja world certainly has its problems, but the world of One Piece is ruthlessly worse. The World Government has taken more lives than all the wars in Naruto combined, not to mention the rampant slavery, the massacres by Buster Call, a dictatorship in power for over 800 years, the horrors committed by the World Government are immeasurable. The Navy is nothing more than an arm of the government, hypocrites who believe in justice but defend the worst.

I find it funny how these people try to "correct" or "fix" a successful story, even with its flaws, without ever having written anything successful themselves, thinking they can do better than the original author.

Please make a Thor that honors the comics; the Thor movies are trash.

If light is treated as qi, it will be practically impossible to deal with Melkor, after all, he was an Ainur and the most powerful among them. If an elf manages to discover this function of light, "qi," the Ainur theoretically mastered it long ago. Even if the plot doesn't follow this path where the protagonist needs to confront Melkor (which, in my opinion, would be correct; otherwise, it would be a flaw in the script), the balance of power remains unbalanced, and if this isn't handled carefully, it could ruin the story. Furthermore, the fact that the Valar can't influence the protagonist is already a flaw in the script because, theoretically, they should master "qi" with much more skill than the protagonist. This took me out of the immersion a bit, but I understand the reason.

Honestly, I didn't know that. But that doesn't change the fact that they are two infinitely different works. It doesn't even make sense to mix the two, but that's just my opinion.

Narnia is a clear allegory for Christianity, which has nothing to do with Harry Potter.

Those who have fingers and tongue do not feel thirsty. I also had a threesome. But a polygamous relationship is much more than sex, satisfying sentimental desires and it is much more difficult and complicated. monogamous is already difficult, imagine 3,4 or 5 people involved in that relationship and it is practically impossible to satisfy them all, there will always be those who feel emotionally neglected.