paja

critics, problem ls with chapters, sometimes I think that they are updated in a wrong order, nothing happens linear and you can find happenings in somehow chaotic order, like attempted kidnaping attempt in last chapters that just got away unexplained. the story lacks direction, like i understand that he treats this like a game or something similiar and works only for his own power but I dont get what the end point can be in here. after all i prefer your previous work, this somehow feels like a downgrade. I hope that it will help you gets better chapters later on.

worth the read if you are looking for something funny. well basically its a chinease fanfic/faceslap. gimmick in that is a pirate working as one from 9 to 5 and no second more. Next point is that its writen in corporate language, this makes it more climatic and funny.

ai slop, 1 sentence stretched to take one page. it gets really tiring to read after some time.

1 st chapter and you already can see lvl of thia novel

looks promising, hopefully it will get development it deserves

raw?

literally i read half a chapter and I'm done. its a crime making Garp like this.

great story, but sometime chapters are translated better and sometimes worse, could be better but i will still givestones

you have come far.