Monsieur_Dreamer
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Monsieur_Dreamer7dReplied to Andrew_Edwards_0410- Monsieur_Dreamer15dCommentedCh 2 New world, old customs.
- Monsieur_Dreamer1mthReplied to AlwaysHigh
It clearly starts with the MC's POV if you haven't noticed with the constant use of "I" then out of nowhere we can see Gojo's thoughts. The POV switched, to put it simply.
'Something is different; his cursed energy has changed,' Satoru thought as he narrowed his eyes. - Monsieur_Dreamer1mthCommented
Harry definitely talk like this
After a harrowing struggle, Harry exclaimed, "This gentleman is still alive!" However, Ron, seeing Harry covered in blood, grew even paler. - Monsieur_Dreamer1mthCommented
The POV keeps switching
'Something is different; his cursed energy has changed,' Satoru thought as he narrowed his eyes. - Monsieur_Dreamer1mthCommented
This is confusing, I'm assuming that Gojo's attitude in hidden inventory arc will change because of this? Gojo grew up selfish and arrogant because he was powerful and taking that selfishness from the start will change a lot of things. This is different, not sure whether good or not since his character development in the hidden inventory wont't make sense anymore.
I'm done acting like their tool. I'll run around, smile, laugh, and eat all the sweets I want. Screw the old fools and their traditions. If I become the strongest, I'll ensure that no one will ever feel as alone as I am. - Monsieur_Dreamer3mthReplied to Dominic_Zibuda
yeah, you don't know what cringe meansđ
"Little Alaric is our pride and joy. There hasn't been a child as intelligent and sensible as him. I've watched him grow up. I've seen all sorts of mischievous and troublesome poor children, you know, it's my profession, but I've never seen such a smart and sensible little boy." - Monsieur_Dreamer4mthReplied to Dominic_Zibuda
Lol what
"Little Alaric is our pride and joy. There hasn't been a child as intelligent and sensible as him. I've watched him grow up. I've seen all sorts of mischievous and troublesome poor children, you know, it's my profession, but I've never seen such a smart and sensible little boy." - Monsieur_Dreamer8mthReplied to PeterGriffith
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"I have grown tired of this," Brain continued, looking at me with complete and utter disinterest. "You have such a large amount of Ethernano, yet your talent is not existent, you learn but your magic has yet to mature at all. Perhaps not all coals can be turned into diamonds." - Monsieur_Dreamer8mthPosted
Not great but not bad either. The dialogues are a bit stiff, it doesn't feel natural but it's readable. I stopped reading when characters from Game of Thrones were summoned, they feel really out of place in the story (which makes sense since they aren't from the world) so I can't really find myself immersed.Although I'm kind of surprised that no Yamanaka and healer was hired to know what happens on both mind and the body when consuming a Joint sold by a 12 years old, it made the Hokage and the ninjas overall look very inconmpetent since that could be exploited by other villages.
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- Monsieur_Dreamer8mthCommentedCh 1 Crossing over
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Didn't expect much so I wasn't really disappointed. This story is above average from the standard in this platfrom but it's still lacking to be called a good story.I haven't really made it that far, the stiff interactions really made me lose interest. The characters just don't feel alive nor interesting. The story just reads like a chinese novel, even the synopsis is like one.To be fair, there were thoughts that was put into making this story but the writing is just lacking.
- Monsieur_Dreamer8mthReplied to NiktaCh 2 Chapter 2: New Clan Head!