Review Detail of LastGod in Hollywood What If
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MC seems like a sleezy grease ball. overweight untalented loser. Hes using other peoples talent to get ahead and most likely will screw up and ruin it at some point. the ONLY thing that i can say he has going for him is he is hard working. But the whole feel of the novel is sleazy like i need a shower. not fun and cool excited to see him become famous.
Hollywood What If
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Andrew_Edwards_0410:Yeah a lot of novels like this are terrible. I read one where the MC gets scripts from a system for doing stuff and he went around changing them. like he changed the entire Harry potter story line to "make it better" and took out the whole point of the entire story. it was ridiculous
Andrew_Edwards_0410:Yeah a lot of novels like this are terrible. I read one where the MC gets scripts from a system for doing stuff and he went around changing them. like he changed the entire Harry potter story line to "make it better" and took out the whole point of the entire story. it was ridiculous
Sup buddy, how about giving my fic a try? It's a Hollywood fic, but I made an effort to write it well.
Andrew_Edwards_0410:Yeah a lot of novels like this are terrible. I read one where the MC gets scripts from a system for doing stuff and he went around changing them. like he changed the entire Harry potter story line to "make it better" and took out the whole point of the entire story. it was ridiculous
Andrew_Edwards_0410:Yeah a lot of novels like this are terrible. I read one where the MC gets scripts from a system for doing stuff and he went around changing them. like he changed the entire Harry potter story line to "make it better" and took out the whole point of the entire story. it was ridiculous
To be fair the Harry Potter books are horribly written, the world building is atrocious and makes no sense and magic works so arbitrarily it’s annoying, plus it’s character development is decent at best
Andrew_Edwards_0410:Yeah a lot of novels like this are terrible. I read one where the MC gets scripts from a system for doing stuff and he went around changing them. like he changed the entire Harry potter story line to "make it better" and took out the whole point of the entire story. it was ridiculous
Archonstine:Sup buddy, how about giving my fic a try? It's a Hollywood fic, but I made an effort to write it well.
I agree with you. But these books are for children, although they are still interesting to read. I would like to read a more elaborate version for a more adult audience.
joc_2086:To be fair the Harry Potter books are horribly written, the world building is atrocious and makes no sense and magic works so arbitrarily it’s annoying, plus it’s character development is decent at best