Review Detail of Monsieur_Dreamer in The Shopkeeper of Konoha

Not great but not bad either. The dialogues are a bit stiff, it doesn't feel natural but it's readable. I stopped reading when characters from Game of Thrones were summoned, they feel really out of place in the story (which makes sense since they aren't from the world) so I can't really find myself immersed.Although I'm kind of surprised that no Yamanaka and healer was hired to know what happens on both mind and the body when consuming a Joint sold by a 12 years old, it made the Hokage and the ninjas overall look very inconmpetent since that could be exploited by other villages.