Review Detail of BlackFox_Memorys in Fate/DC Universe
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There are simply a lot of frustrating things, the MC is very weak and a hostage, I'm still in the first mission chapter, and it's simply frustrating that he acts so emotionally, simply idiotic.He knows he is weak, and practically useless without a heroic spirit, if time runs out he becomes more useless than he already is, he will be easily captured, besides those S+ gifts he received? Where did they go? Any place? Simply edit that chapter and remove that information.
Fate/DC Universe
Gilgamesh9669
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They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
BlackFox_Memorys:SSS
Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
brah iIcan tell you now your story will never get that far you will just drop it and it makes the gifts redundant and useless. very poor storytelling choices
Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
Then why use fate heroes as powerbase? People expect powers from fate universe heroic spirits = relatively op mc Not a weak hostage
Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
u literally gave him c rank stats in the first f*king chapter!!! since u don't seem to realize what that means, lets give u an example! if ur mc went to marvel he could clap all the avengers except the hulk and thor!!! and with all the things u put him through, there no way he would be weak minded at all!!! and u completely messed up the personality of someone who went though all that!!! with the way u had made it, then by chapter 3 he should of resembled f*king sasuke emo as*!!!!
Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
man this is called a story don't worry this is one of the good ones naruto wasn't the strongest mentally from the start sasuke stayed imperfect our hopes are placed on imperfects but people create so perfect characters that it leaves no difference just diff starting power and common list of wives etc
Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag