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I’m going to support my own work and say that it’s worth a read! I’m a native english speaker, so the grammar isn’t half bad. I try to stick to conventional means of dialogue as well. The worldbuilding might be a little choppy, but the characters memorable and likable. Please give this novel a chance! (:
I genuinely enjoy what I've read so far. The grammar is well-written, so it's easy to read. The pacing is well done, though the beginning is a bit confusing, I'm sure that's just a matter of "It will be uncovered later". The characters are interesting, especially the demon character, who seems to have interesting motives. I also really like the "gray" parts of the story. If anyone is considering giving this a read, I'd really recommend it. [img=recommend]
I really did enjoy the novel so far! First and foremost, the representation of autism is fantastic. The author also went out of their way to provide definitions to clarify anything that the reader may not be familiar with. The writing is fantastically done. Many webnovels have the issue of grammatical errors, but I have seen none with this one so far! The descriptions and authors voice are beautifully done. I woukd reccomend this 10/10!
The novel is very easy to read with good flow and pacing. Though a lot of people may think the concept isn’t entirely unique, it’s executed much better than majority of any other similar novels. The MC is refreshing and the world building is done beautifully, without it feeling like too much. I hope to read more soon.
The start of the novel was actually REALLY well done. My only gripe was the extreme exposition dump that came almost immediately after. I felt a little dreadful after that, sure, but I continued to read and really liked the narration and the tone of the book overall. The characters do get a little jumbled up and confused in my head, but I'm never really good at memorizing characters unless they have extremely distinctive features, so take that as you will. I personally enjoyed the worldbuilding, but I also felt that it was a little too similar to make other novels that I have read before. Despite such, I did like what I read so far, and I hope you continue to write this novel.
I really did enjoy the novel so far! It's humorous, has decent pacing, and is generally lighthearted. A lot of novels similar to this one tend to have perfect MCs who can do no wrong, but the MC here is unique in his own way, and isn't like the cliché perfect protagonists. The only 'issue' is the grammar, but even then, it's not so bad. If you overlook that, the story is a great read and I'd definitely recommend anyone interested to give it a read.