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Enjoying the story so far! World building is still foggy, there isn’t a clear explination on the differences in hair and eye color, but its also still early in the storyline. Writing is good, characters are enjoyable. I feel for Lilith and what shes having to deal with. Can’t wait to see how the story progresses. Magenta better watch out!

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Thank goi for your review! <3 I’ll try my best to improve the worldbuilding!