halfblinde

Thank you for your review!

Thank you for your review!

I’m going to support my own work and say that it’s worth a read! I’m a native english speaker, so the grammar isn’t half bad. I try to stick to conventional means of dialogue as well. The worldbuilding might be a little choppy, but the characters memorable and likable. Please give this novel a chance! (:

I enjoyed this novel a lot! The writing is well done, the syntax was crazy good, and it really had a great hand into making the world much more interesting! I hope the novel will continue, good luck!

My only true geope with this novel is the grammar and the way it was written. It was hard to go through at first, but the plot and the characters really do make up for it. I hope there’s some kind of editor that helps pick up on this, since I did like the story.

Thank goi for your review! <3 I’ll try my best to improve the worldbuilding!

I genuinely enjoy what I've read so far. The grammar is well-written, so it's easy to read. The pacing is well done, though the beginning is a bit confusing, I'm sure that's just a matter of "It will be uncovered later". The characters are interesting, especially the demon character, who seems to have interesting motives. I also really like the "gray" parts of the story. If anyone is considering giving this a read, I'd really recommend it.

Thank you for your kind review! 🙂

The pacing is great! I really enjoy the plot, since it’s the type of book I like to read. The characters are memorable and enjoyable, especially Dhruv. The plot is engaging, so I would really reccomend anyone to read this.

I thoroughly enjoyed this novel! The writing, syntax, and author’s voice are very pleasant to read. The pacing and worldbuilding are nicely done, in my opinion. The characters are also very well done! I would definitely reccomend giving this novel a try.