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My Time System
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My Time System

Itsuki_Suzuki

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What is My Time System

My Time System is a popular web novel written by the author Itsuki_Suzuki, covering SYSTEM, MAGIC, ROMANCE, ADVENTURE, ACTION, DRAMA, SUPERNATURAL, REINCARNATION, Fantasy genres. It's viewed by 591.9K readers with an average rating of 4.77/5 and 58 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 84 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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Ishigami Jeran a single 19-year-old freshman college student, A self Proclaimed Genius about everything except being kind. He lives with his twin brother in the Philippines because of their family problem while his whole family lives in Kyoto, Japan. His premonition came true from his dream. He died in a bus accident, But for some odd reason he woke up lying on a shrine. In that place, A woman suddenly appeared and identified herself as Chronohades, The gatekeeper and the God of Time. To clear up Ishigami's head, That was full of questions. She told him that he was truly dead and that he is now standing in front of the gate through the Spirit Realm. In certain circumstances, Chronohades proposed a deal. Get reincarnated again, pass the trial and fight The Brixis Empire, that once terrorized that world, Or rest your soul in the Spirit Realm. Ishigami answered while trembling due to the unpreparedness of his soul to devote himself on fighting. Therefore Chronohades bestowed upon a power called the "Time System." In the late game, he called himself the God of Time. ___ Ishigami: "My life ended in the tragic car accident and I was reincarnated as a savior of my crush but after that, I got sent into another world named Ozeathra, where the world is full of unfairness and where I will experience the real betrayal, despair, and sorrow. ___ Another Tags: R18, Tragedy, Betrayal, Weak to Strong, Gods, Demons, OP Main Character, Harem, War, Ruthless-Cold MC, Medieval Era, Conspiracy, Explicit Violence, Political, Rebellion, Revenge, Rivalries, Terrorism, Matured Themes, Dark Fantasy, Person in a Strange World, Summoned into Another World, Profanity, Manipulation, Kingdom, Ideals, Female Characters Supremacy ___ DISCLAIMER: Every chapter of my work is all RAW and Unedited because it was hard to meet the deadline. I will edit this in Fall 2021 and release the completed edited version of the novel in Winter 2022. ___ Moderator: Fujiwara_Aoi Content & Platform Editor: Roy! Story Reviewer: KCSakkimi

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Reviews58

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Itsuki_Suzuki
Itsuki_SuzukiAuthorItsuki_Suzuki

Before I quit here. I will leave you an honest review and message on my story. I will answer the questions. Why is the story so bad. That conversations are so tedious that people have no character development and exact identity? In total I didn’t really write a storyboard in season 1 of My Time System. I know and I admit that the chapters I made were hideous. The season 1 It's kinda rush. My grammar is pretty wrongly and I’m not doing well to correct that. The plot of the story is meaningless because there is no thrill to the reader. Moreover, the chapters are too short. I also have no experience in writing so this is just how I work. Why does it take so long to publish a story and then be so short? I repeat what I have to say because I am doing some school works and I am dealing with a chronic illness that will shorten my life. I'll just say another illness I'm dealing with right now, I also admit that I'm mentally unstable so I quickly develop anxiety and depression. One of the chronic diseases I have is G.E.R.D. , I have been fighting this for 2 years and it is almost incurable, which has led to Oral and Throat Cancer. There are the diseases I'm dealing with, that's not all. Why am I writing? Whenever I am writing, it gives new hope to myself that one day I will be able to overcome all these trials. I also write to pursue my mother’s dream. 1 month hiatus will happen in the month of May, so I can fix the storyboard of season 2 and get ready for MGS. That's all I'm going to tell you. One of my dreams is that I finish this novel, please help me to finish this, before terrified day has come to my life. By the way I'm just a highschool student with a lot of regrets in life. So guys don't waste your long life on useless things because it was never given to me.

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author made this novel. Good luck on your MGS journey of daily updates for four months. I've been there and I can say at least that it was a good experience for me. I am praying for your recovery 🙏 Please don't give up hope yet.

kpthe1
kpthe1Lv4kpthe1

This book is lacking only one thing, and that is proper editing, but it is already pointed out in the synopsis that the writer will make the editing later this year. So now I can only do is wait for the proper version and immediately soak myself in this fantastic book!!!

Shiroooiii
ShiroooiiiLv2Shiroooiii

I think author it will be better if you join our community and tag your friends with your works. If you're not good at English find a translator and editor to make you ease.

TheOmnivoreReader
TheOmnivoreReaderLv1TheOmnivoreReader

Dearest Author, You're slow burns are exceptionally well drawn out and played. Makes a wonder how you became so gifted in the area of romance drama.

FirrShinra
FirrShinraLv1FirrShinra

You're a new author right? I can help you, first find a mentor that will explain and teach you to make a good story. Second be confident even your work is not good and last make a good story with a good lesson in the end.

secrecyoftheyear
secrecyoftheyearLv1secrecyoftheyear

The novel was a good fanatic story. The updating stability was not a good well because of his own problems. Recommended do not hesitate to put this in your reading list.

imagineTishaD
imagineTishaDLv4imagineTishaD

Hello Author, I am on Webnovel, and wanted to ask you something. I have messaged you on Instagram, can you kindly check and reply me dear author ?

kiminowatashi
kiminowatashiLv1kiminowatashi

Your boredom on your house will become nothing because of this story heartwarming yeah very recommended and the last support our dearest author.

Lalavida10
Lalavida10Lv1Lalavida10

Honest Review I will post this about Ishigami and Risya, I want that they still together even in the finale of this story. The story was too promising

ViolyFilles
ViolyFillesModeratorViolyFilles

I'm the moderator (not editor). Itsuki-san finding her own editor. I don't know what on her mind, she rejected my offer last last week. She told me so I wouldn’t have a hard time taking care of the feedbacks. If the author is offline or not available, you can still message me regarding for the comments, reviews, questions.

CiaaDReader
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The synopsis alone can hook you up wtf noice !!! Ive been blessed 🥲 Tears of joy ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💯💯💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥

knossos
knossosLv4knossos

I can tell OP is trying very hard with this story. I think it's an inspiring work of passion. OP, you're doing really great work! It's interesting to read. Keep up the good work.

Shamira_Farhath
Shamira_FarhathLv2Shamira_Farhath

Good job. You've written a great novel.please take care of grammatical errors,I hope you'll do that coming days. The character development and world background is awesome. Best of luck.

catvi
catviLv5catvi

The story is going somewhere, I just don't know where. But I respect this author immensely. Why? He actually has the guts to take a time off to think things through. So many authors in Webnovel simply rush along without planning out the story. When the readers call them out, or when they themselves realize they messed up the plot, RARELY do they have the integrity to just stop. Just stop and read their own novel, identify the weakness, and then begin writing. I have high hopes for the author and story, because he is doing exactly that. Kudos to you.

Romel_Rosy
Romel_RosyLv1Romel_Rosy

Ang Creative ng author,mag ingat lang minsan sa grammar at sa mga maling spelling pero sa ngayon medyo tricky syang basahin,sa totoo lang maganda para syang Isekai, Keep it up Geran Ishigami. -rosibalasi

Pedophilia
PedophiliaLv1Pedophilia

I'm really shock if this going become a masterpiece in one chapter its got 500 views. I wanna say that it's going good story thats all. I'm not good at reviewing the story byee byee

Leviathanks
LeviathanksLv1Leviathanks

It's amazing and I couldn't ask for anything more. The story help pass the time and can easily keep your attention. It's great when you reading in the chilly weather.

AngelJasmine
AngelJasmineLv1AngelJasmine

Yesss I find another drama story I will read it but if your work is boring I will drop it right away. [img=recommend] fight fight fight newbie

AtaiMuratbekov
AtaiMuratbekovLv5AtaiMuratbekov

Interesting concept. I just started but it seems pretty interesting. A little bit of editing and it may become better. Good job! Keep it up!

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