yes, you're right about that but as someone who has been reading it really early, I just wrote this to let the writer know he/she improved. It have more mistakes before ahaha. My previous rating (deleted) was certainly worse off than this.
Daniel coughed a few times to let the remaining water in his throat go smoothly with his left hand covering his mouth while the remaining water was in the cup held with his right hand.
But surprisingly, their atmosphere became silent right after he answered it. Everett wasn't saying anything to him. He had his head facing the carpet beneath the sofa with his ears slightlyâŚred?
Writing 7/10
Storyline 11/10
Update stability 8/10
Character Design 10/10
World background 15/10
Anyway I really like it. Vampire will always be my thing. A VAMPIRE FEMALE LEAD? TAKE MY MONEY!
lol just kidding I'm broke atm.