Review Detail of Chris_Ellen in Luna : The Crescent Crest Elementalist

Thanks for the support!! I'm glad you like it. :)

I don't know about other ratings as I just started reading but I feel I need to correct your rating of writing to 5, at most 6 because some of the sentences are just... English is my second language and I'm not brave enough to say I know better than native speakers. But I learned enough to know that sentence like e.g. " As she closed her door, turning her head to face the staircases she hates the most." is not really a good one. And at the end of paragraph is wrong form of "break", which wouldn't be that bad if it wasn't capitalized. Here I'm specifically using example from ch. 5 but in previous ones it wasn't that great either. The use of tenses just confuses me (I'm applying that from my language, you write in one tense) because they are changing from present simple to past simple and I think sometimes there is other tenses too (I'm bad at these but I can tell, sometimes, when used wrong if that makes sense lol).

First of all, thank you for pointing out that my grammer have many mistakes.I searched it up about using only one tense and will certainly use that structure from now on. I will fix the old ones up when I have free time. Plus learning more about grammer. Sorry for disappointing you with my grammer skills :( ps:I am writing this as a hobby since I like to tell the stories that are happening in my mind and in my dreams even though I have no experience in writing but I hope to give the reader a better experience so I appreciate that you left this message.