Well, that's why I choose to use simple sentences rather than complicated ones. English is not my first language after all. Let me know with your comments if everything is clear after these edits.

Tomorrow :)

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Alright, I'll edit them. Thanks!

I see, some readers find this a bit clunky(I think). Can you point out those sentences that you found hard to read? This is my first story, so I'd like to know what are those and I'll pull my effort to optimize the sentence structures.

*You're welcome! Shame on me, lol!

Your welcome! I'm in the same boat with you as well. The struggles of not being native in english, thus, not my first language. Like, I got confident when I finished my chapter in google docs thinking this is probably good. But when my chapter is already published, my sweat floods like crazy! So nervous since my chapter has now been read by my small readers collected around the world, hahaha! I heard about string theory(just heard, like just a phrase of it, lol!). But just today, I tried to search and read about that and… my head exploded! it's too much for me, lol! From what I understood, like all—aye, I can't let others what's going on. Though, I'm still trying to understand what really is string theory, it's complex, but it tickles the fascinations that—

I like how the author executes the storyline as if you're on the water slide while you're reading this! So smooth! And that's because how the narratives are written so well that you will be directly sent inside the story itself. Yes, I mean it. As for the characters, I can tell the author put a lot of efforts into making them as realistic as they should. You can feel them as if they're beside you. What are you waiting for? Read this now!

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The interactions of the four main characters are truly realistic, it felt like these buddies are your best friends! Yes, I mean it, the dialogues are blending with great execution on what conversations should be, what the talks in real life should be.  All of those are thanks to the author's writing quality, as well as the style. Try to spot the grammatical errors, but you can't!  Oh, you realized that this novel is powered by science, physics, and stuff? Don't be afraid of that, the way the narratives are written will allow you to understand them without the help of google's assistance. I wonder why the heck those things got stuck in the mid-air. Fantasy strings? Quantum strings? I don't know. Read it to find out!

The dialogues are top-notch! Each chapter has them and is well-written as it allows you to get immersive the interactions between the characters and the environment, which is hella good! And because of that, writing quality should be that great, no errors and such, and the readability rides like a vehicle on the bump-free road, so smooth! The story is pretty slow though, as the author said, but don't make it SUPER slow, to the point the storyline is slower than a snail.  It's neat pacing overall, you should read this!

I liked how the heroes portrayed differently rather than just "level-up-and-go-all-out-power" type heroes. But here, the heroes are classified based on their field of mastery, such as being an engineer(I think). Now imagine; the engineering department is vast, then blend it with fantasy's concept of system… you get the creative idea, which is strongly analogous to offensive type, defensive type, and healer type found in RPG elements. Or, a programmer went crazy.  The main character is indeed well-written, and so, writing quality. You can understand his thoughts and emotional reactions with other characters as well. It's because the narrative is written in first-person POV, which allows you to have an immersive view inside the MC's head. But, it has the limits of not being an omniscient narrator, which puts the mystery of what's the deal with that shade guy. The world background seems to be in the modern era with the mix of medieval-ish atmosphere where they wore outfits such as robes, shields, and weapons like swords and spears. Do they have guns, too? Overall, a great story! And yes, it's an isekai, but give this a try, you won't regret it!

Yes, you already sent me a review. Thx btw!

Isekai is love! Isekai is life! If you read this novel written by an experienced author, you'll find this as a reading hobby until it becomes like a drug! You're hesitating to read just because it's an isekai? Come on, click the first chapter, and don't stop! If you don't, you just missed the great story.

Nice one!

The concept is pretty unique where the main character's body swaps to others, not just on webnovel, but also outside the webnovel. It reminds me of the manga I finished reading where the MC swaps others' bodies. Now for the writing quality, it's pretty decent. However, the paragraphs are long, the readers would drown from the wall of text. I suggest you should keep each paragraph with 2-3 sentences to make the readability runs like streams of water. Also, one more thing, the paragraphs should have only one character involved in them. For example: It's not-> "What's your name?" asked the teacher while her dominant thumb scrolling up her phone's screen like there was no tomorrow. "M-my name's Jeff," he replied, shaking as if his whole essence became the earthquakes of nervousness. But-> "What's your name?" asked the teacher while her dominant thumb scrolling up her phone's screen like there was no tomorrow. "My name's Jeff," he replied, shaking as if his whole essence became like the earthquakes of nervousness. I'm just a small author, but that's my advice for you to make the novel's narratives flow better. Keep writing and good luck!