Review Detail of Dedz_ in The String Age : How A New Force Changed Everything

Thanks for the review! It's truly encouraging to receive such appreciation, ESPECIALLY when I am not a native English speaker. When I published the story, my greatest fear was to deliver poor writing quality, with too many awkward sentences or misused constructions. I think that's something many of us (non-native) fear, but you help me a lot placate my fears. Thank you! I'll keep writing the rest of the story now (y) By the way, I really shouldn't give clue about what really is going on, but ... I'll just say this: Google "String Theory", and you'll have more clues to what is going on ;) The truth will be revealed in book 2! Only, it will only be the beginning....

Your welcome! I'm in the same boat with you as well. The struggles of not being native in english, thus, not my first language. Like, I got confident when I finished my chapter in google docs thinking this is probably good. But when my chapter is already published, my sweat floods like crazy! So nervous since my chapter has now been read by my small readers collected around the world, hahaha! I heard about string theory(just heard, like just a phrase of it, lol!). But just today, I tried to search and read about that and… my head exploded! it's too much for me, lol! From what I understood, like all—aye, I can't let others what's going on. Though, I'm still trying to understand what really is string theory, it's complex, but it tickles the fascinations that—

Yes, we are in the same boat! I really feel what you say. When we are not native, we are unsure what words to use, when to use them... However, I guarantee that your writing quality is very good; there are few grammatical errors and no spelling mistakes. To be honest, some sentences are awkward, but I was able to understand everything easily. On web novel, your novel is above average. If you want to further improve, you can use Grammarly - I use the premium version for my book, and it really helps. As for the string theory, it will be explained in very simple words in the novel (book 2). For now, there is no need to understand anything other than this: scientists today suspect there are more than a dozen dimensions in which we live, which may .. or may not... interact with ours.