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So this is my first omegaverse story but I'm very familiar with the bl genre. I'm a fan of it and the omegaverse is a really interesting trope that I've always wanted to get into. Things I liked: Characters! Wonho seems like a really intelligent person with a good head on his shoulders. His friends seem pretty interesting as well. I like how his social circle is very diverse and has a few alphas as his friends despite being an omega. Events. Like, woah! I don't wanna spoil anything but that one scene was really intense! I really liked the scene where Wonho's friends are helping him after the traumatic event. That shows how much they care for him and I'm a huge fan of healthy friendships. Those don't occur too often in romance stories, unfortunately. World building. I'm aware of what alphas, betas, and omegas are, however, deltas are a completely new thing to me. I've heard about how society in omegaverse treats each secondary gender. Therefore, I think the author is very on point with how people treat Wonho after he's labeled as an omega. Minwoo. So far, I like this guy. He's done some things, like refused to drug Wonho, that really surprised me. The synopsis made me assume that he was going to be one of those unsavory male love interests who manipulates and forces the protagonist to do things that they don't want to simply because the love interest has some sort of power (wealth, status, etc.) and good looks. I see lots of character development possibilities for this man. However, I just wish he was introduced into the story sooner. Things I disliked: Deltas. This group is considered to be either disabled or psychopaths/sociopaths simply because they are the product of two betas. I personally am not a fan of this type of characterization where a group is antagonized like that. That's just my personal opinion. Grammar and Punctuation. The author uses apostrophes for dialogue instead of quotes. The grammar isn't the best but it's not terrible. Overall, I really enjoyed this story so far. Keep writing, author! [img=recommend]

Right off the bat, this story is very intriguing! I really like the premise, the world building, and the characters. Lenna is my favorite secondary character mainly because I really like parents who are very supportive and encouraging towards their kid's goals. I also really enjoyed the descriptions of the settings, characters, and even their attire. Overall, great story!

This story feels like a mashup of Hunger Games and Ender's Game. I'm a couple chapters in and this story is pretty cool. The MC is rude to everyone but it's a great set up for character development for later on. The other world building is really interesting My only issue is the grammatical errors but that's about it. Overall, cool story!

Two chapters in and this story is pretty cool! The descriptions of the fighters is really cool and the fight scenes are very intense. I feel bad for the MC because of how he is treated by both his coworkers and his audience. I found a few grammatical errors but nothing too huge. Overall, great story!

I've read 4 chapters so far and this story is really interesting! I like the Biblical references and the character descriptions. The only thing I had an issue with were a few grammar/spelling issues but that's about it. Overall, great story so far!

I've read three chapters and this story is pretty interesting so far. I'm usually not a fan of contemporary romance but this felt a little different. The prologue was really heavy in a good way. I was not expecting that! Other than the prologue, my favorite part so far is the dynamic between Rain and her best friend. The dialogue between her and Aria is really interesting and it makes their friendship feel very real. Neutral stuff. Tbh, when the author started introducing a bunch of different male characters within a couple of chapters (not including the brother), I thought this was supposed to be a reverse harem (or just a harem). There's nothing bad or good about that, it's just an observation I made. Now for the negatives. The grammar is kinda poor in certain parts. Rain mentions that her brother has a 'mental' problem. I feel like the author could've written that part better by describing what it is exactly since there's a lot of different mental conditions in the world. It just doesn't make sense for her to describe his condition very vaguely, as if she barely knows him and anything about his condition despite being his sister. Overall, great story!

I've read a couple of chapters and this story is interesting so far. The prologue was pretty intense and I like how the author described the president. I feel like the author incorporated their personal views on politics and how the politicians can be very questionable. For the characters, I originally thought that Hitomi was gonna be a cliched "I'm not like other girls" girl but she's not. Instead, she admires her best friend, Minako, even though she is the complete opposite of her. She mentions that people view Minako as promiscuous but Hitomi doesn't seem to think any less of her friend, which is a good thing since it shows that Hitomi is not super judgmental towards what other people do with their own bodies. I also like how the author described the Smiths. It feels like the author is taking from their own experience of what Mormon families in the US are like. I liked how the author described Hitomi's experience in the US and how the change impacted her. I thought it was very appropriate for the author to include Bible quotes at the beginning of each chapter since this is a story that involves angels. Now for the negatives. Mainly just poor grammar. I thought it was a little weird when the author started describing the MC's posterior and chest. However, it then related to Western beauty standards and Hitomi's self image. In that case, it was kinda relevant. But then the author mentioned that people who are muscular and very sweaty are "Totally worth it", which I thought was weird. Overall, this story is pretty interesting!

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I've read a couple of chapters with my boyfriend so far and this story is really interesting! Skye is a very strong woman. I really enjoyed her internal monologues. I also enjoyed the fact that the author was able to write accents for some of the characters (including the MC). The descriptions of the settings, characters, and clothes are vivid. The character design is really thorough. It's easy to figure out who is supposed to be who. Skye is my favorite character and my boyfriend really likes Tidas. There were a few grammatical errors. Also, I like the fact that Skye refuses to conform to ridiculous gender expectations during that time period but I didn't like the fact that she kept on saying that she is not like other women. Overall, great story! I am looking forward to reading more

I've read 4 chapters so far. This book reminds me of Scary Stories to Tell in the Dark but with a mix of comedy and other genres. All these stories so far were very different and odd, yet interesting. My only issue was the poor grammar but that's about it.