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That has been a common complaint. I am refocusing on this in recent chapters.
I like stories like this, but the one complaint and I would recommend author consider this. "System" novels are over used and not very fun to read anymore. Very few of them do it right IMHO. I like the general story, but I woudl rather just read eastern fantasy cultivation novel than system update.
I love these kinds of stories. The writing is solid and the characters have a lot of....well character. This is really great. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and will continue as the story progresses.
This is a very solid story. A interesting take on the whole gender bender stuff. The author doesn't get to over the top in reactions also which is nice. I will keep an eye on the story and finish up more chapters.
Reading this has been a pleasure so far. Story is goofy from outside, but it is well written and gripping once you dive in. I highly recommend this to anyone who wants a "sorta" slice of life, but set in a odd background setting.
A solid story. I've found that people who take a unique spin on the genre do it best. I enjoy XianXia, but one of the main issues with it is the overpowered and unbeatable nature of main leads. I hope his companions remain actually useful.
Yeah I got a bit carried away on first chapter haha. I might split it up an extend the first portion a bit more.
appreciate the comments 100%. The chapters are edited to habe proper punctuation for most part, but reformating some sentences are coming later. Thank you
This was an incredibly solid piece and I'm confused why their isn't more. Other than some grammar issues which are minor the story is fantastic and I have no complaints about it at all. If the author continues this or starts another story I will 100% add to my library if this is the quality we can expect in future.
While I do enjoy power fantasy this seems well paced. I hope the author takes the time to explore character weaknesses and not make them ridiculously overpowered too quickly a slow burn imho is always better than a quick burn. This is a very underthe radar novel.