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JYLewis

JYLewis

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paypal.me/JYLewis2016 https://www.subscribestar.com/JYLewis My patreon has been discontinued due to them very likely not paying people.

2019-12-23 JoinedSouth Korea
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis3mth
    Replied to Dobbyneedsasock

    and?

    Ch 1 The End is only the Beginning 1
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis3mth
    Replied to Headbutt

    That has been a common complaint. I am refocusing on this in recent chapters.

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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis3mth
    Posted

    I like stories like this, but the one complaint and I would recommend author consider this. "System" novels are over used and not very fun to read anymore. Very few of them do it right IMHO. I like the general story, but I woudl rather just read eastern fantasy cultivation novel than system update.

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    A Path of Bone and Poison
    Fantasy Romance · Morbidwishes
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Replied to OliveBreeze

    (will be updated as I read more).

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    Records of Rebirth
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Replied to SilentMild

    Hawaii

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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Replied to SilentMild

    I live in korea and speak korean. My wife is full korean

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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Replied to SilentMild

    I live in korea and speak korean. My wife is full korean

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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Replied to SilentMild

    Certainly. It is early morning here and I need to work haha

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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Replied to Shionokami

    The first like 15 chapters used to be 2 to 3 separate chapters. So if it felt long that is why

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    Dance Between Mortals and Immortals
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Posted

    I love these kinds of stories. The writing is solid and the characters have a lot of....well character. This is really great. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and will continue as the story progresses.

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    Endbringer
    Fantasy · Shionokami
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Posted

    This is a very solid story. A interesting take on the whole gender bender stuff. The author doesn't get to over the top in reactions also which is nice. I will keep an eye on the story and finish up more chapters.

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    The Crown Prince Thinks I'm a Guy
    Fantasy Romance · Hua_Li_An
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Posted

    Reading this has been a pleasure so far. Story is goofy from outside, but it is well written and gripping once you dive in. I highly recommend this to anyone who wants a "sorta" slice of life, but set in a odd background setting.

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    Dear My Undead Princess: Till Death Do Us (Not) Part
    Sci-fi Romance · Aciee_GelaTin
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Posted

    A solid story. I've found that people who take a unique spin on the genre do it best. I enjoy XianXia, but one of the main issues with it is the overpowered and unbeatable nature of main leads. I hope his companions remain actually useful.

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    The Romantic Cultivator
    Eastern Fantasy · Avidfan
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Replied to Avidfan

    Yeah I got a bit carried away on first chapter haha. I might split it up an extend the first portion a bit more.

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    Dance Between Mortals and Immortals
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Replied to Nightingale367

    I appreciate that. :)

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    Nirvana sect master system
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Replied to Drapetomaniac12

    I really need to get going on this one. My first work needs to finish first volume first though

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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Replied to Drapetomaniac12

    I really need to get going on this one. My first work needs to finish first volume first though

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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Replied to itsmeTuba

    appreciate the comments 100%. The chapters are edited to habe proper punctuation for most part, but reformating some sentences are coming later. Thank you

    A young girl stood upon the platform. She could hardly be older than 14 years old by most people if they saw her. Almost all would be enraptured by her beauty even at her youthful age. With snow like skin that was flawlessly smooth like a freshly felled cherry blossom pedal contrasted by long midnight colored hair tied up into a long ponytail. Her body was petite and athletic, but slightly shorter than the average woman for some it would be point against her, but the height seemed to accent her features well. Besides the fact that her body was petite for her age that was not where her true beauty lay, but it was in her face. With round crescent shaped eyes that were contrasted, by delicate, soft, pink lips that made any man acknowledge that she was beautiful despite her clearly being a street kid.
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Posted

    This was an incredibly solid piece and I'm confused why their isn't more. Other than some grammar issues which are minor the story is fantastic and I have no complaints about it at all. If the author continues this or starts another story I will 100% add to my library if this is the quality we can expect in future.

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    The Shadow I live With
    Horror&Thriller · JustLikeWriting777
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  • JYLewis
    JYLewis4mth
    Posted

    While I do enjoy power fantasy this seems well paced. I hope the author takes the time to explore character weaknesses and not make them ridiculously overpowered too quickly a slow burn imho is always better than a quick burn. This is a very underthe radar novel.

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    Nirvana sect master system
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