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Oh... Sadness... Really...? You could have at least chosen something more... coherent, yes? Like... Melancholy or Intolerance, or whatever... but sadness... ugh...
Nunca mais foi atualizado, logo eu devo clasifica-la com 1 estrela, pelo simples motivo de que quero vela per der as 5 estrelas perfeitas, MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (;~P)
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Bahahahahah! Exactly!
Me and You! ;)
I agree! Best companion! Real husband material, guy Cleans, sews, cooks and on top of that he's a veterinarian/doctor! There's nothing to complain about lol!
And I understand and to a certain extent I agree, but the author could have the decency to at least demarcate the change of POV, because changing in the middle of a sentence, or from one paragraph to another, without warning is very irritating!
https ://www .fanfiction. net/u/ 4029118/0-Jordinio-0 ----------------------------------------------------------- É esse, mas sem os espaços
Especially because the only reason I'm saving her is to abuse them... Which most of the time are also underage female characters (like Koneko)... so... eww....
There is an error in the part where it says that the first hokage(Hashirama Senju) trained the third(Hiruzen Sarutobi), in fact, the one who trained the third hokage(Hiruzen Sarutobi) was the second(Tobirama Senju), and not the first(Hashirama Senju )...