Review Detail of LaxusDarkMoon in One Piece: Reborn as a Skypiean

I like the fanfic, I really do, but the dialogue is so poorly done that it hurts... Literally no one talks like that, the dialogue sounds like two amateur actors are trying to recite a poorly written script... Sorry if I'm being stupid, but I can't... The idea is good, the plot you built is good, but the execution is horrible, definitely at the MTL level of a Chinese Novel... PS: The low rating in Update Stability is due to the author being a Mercenary...