Indeed, this story is stunning just the way it is. I love how heavy its theme yet how smooth the story flows. You really did great, author🥺

I am quite perplexed of what's going in the first chapter BUT what I do like is it gives me that every day vibe. It's unlike the novels I have read so far which is why I have to say thumbs up to the uniqueness, author ^^

And it has a lot of chapters.. woah. I'm in love of the plot! I can't even really think of how to critique this one. This is indeed written just the right way! You've done an admirable job, author!

Synopsis got my attention! Even the storyline is going well. But I can't get enough.. continue writing author! I know this will be a great one.

Loving the book cover and so is the story itself! I've been reading a lot of wolf stories and this is one great read! Will be reading more~~

I'd say the book is a captivating one! Great storyline. A few grammatical errors but at least, nothing too major. Loving the characters! Continue the good work^^

Truly nicely done! The storyline flows intrinsically especially since it has the first person point of view. Great work, author! Will be looking for more^^

Highly recommending this book! The storyline is going really well. And the heroine's character has been depicted with ease! Great job author!

The synopsis got me hooked! And I love stories that depict how life can be so full of misery. That's enough make it so realistic. Hoping you continue! Ps. I love that you're writing in your language as well^^

I am strongly curious of Tom's personality! He's a great male protagonist. I can picture him as someone who's not so talkative but very much approachable! Great job in doing elaborate illustrations, author!

It's really good!! I cannot criticize it. I was enthralled! Reading the first 2 chapters word for word, I nearly thought I travelled to their world. I'm not joking, this story is an exciting one! Furthermore, I love how the characters has been illustrated! Great novel!!

An imposing way to start a novel! It nearly knocked me on spot. An inspiration for readers who write! I haven't read all the chapters but it definitely have uniqueness to it. The character building—their personalities—it has been delivered with ease! Bless up, author! Continue instilling inspiration^^

For a writer, especially those who are just starting out, this novel will be really inspirational. The plot claimed my interest. Although it has articulate utterance of how the story will flow, the writing had its intriguing scheme of stealing my attention. Very well done, author!

Although there was not so much on the synopsis, the chapters are worthy of reading! There are a few grammar issues but aren't something big. I was really intrigued of Augustus' personality and secrets and I suggest stir it up a little more. Great job in describing the settings however leave a little more for character building. All in all, I enjoyed it! Keep writing!! Ah, yes, the sisters are worth mentioning as well! Their bond, I'm sure it really is strong^^

I'm not so much of a fan of BL but the story is written well! Nonetheless, I would like to see more metaphors and use of figurative languages. The story did a great job taking me into its world. Continue writing and keep it up, author!

I love that you utilized foreshadowing in your work! And nicely done^^ Although, one thing, I really would like to understand the conversations happening so for that, I suggest if you're really apt to using your language, have vivid but concise description at the end. Some part were also lengthy so try to break those into two. Nonetheless, it is a great start! Considering this is your first stepping stone. Keep up and fighting!!

The start is really interesting but as I go through I got more engrossed of it! Not only that, I tend to forget names/terms but the ones that has been introduced just marked in me. Keep up, author! Will be looking for more from you^^

A billionare and a beautiful but unfortunate lady, I will definitely wait for their story. As what others said, it really was spledid! The writing, characters, they were all written so well!

This is a fantasy novel—something that really requires vivid and wide imagination. You just hit it on the spot, author. Great work, indeed. Keep on writing, idol!

Woah, the synopsis. That is really commendable! I know I will be looking forward to this one. But I cannot afford to wait so author, fighting! Keep the chapters coming😁😁