Review Detail of miss_polarity in Room Full of Mirrors

Although there was not so much on the synopsis, the chapters are worthy of reading! There are a few grammar issues but aren't something big. I was really intrigued of Augustus' personality and secrets and I suggest stir it up a little more. Great job in describing the settings however leave a little more for character building. All in all, I enjoyed it! Keep writing!! Ah, yes, the sisters are worth mentioning as well! Their bond, I'm sure it really is strong^^