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ChocolatChan

ChocolatChan

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I'll write when I feel inspiration again with emphasis on "again", which is usually never. I love some sci-fi or supernatural/horror. Well, that about it, I guess. Nothing else to say then bye~

2018-08-16 JoinedUnited States
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  • ChocolatChan
    ChocolatChan15d
    Replied to Atalkingrock

    It's ironic to find someone criticizing an author for grammatical error when your review is just as bad.

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    INTO THE VOID
    Fantasy · Tian_Tu
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  • ChocolatChan
    ChocolatChan27d
    Replied to Misaki_Sempai_4789

    So, wait, you're ten years old?!?!

    After 2030, the world is changed into a new place. A place where the hunger for power increased. A place where Robots with emotions and Humans being apathetic and emotionless, work side-by-side. But everything comes with a cost and that cost was experienced in 2050.
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    Shin the 'Hacker'.
    Sci-fi Romance · Seulil2061
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  • ChocolatChan
    ChocolatChan1mth
    Replied to nishidurani

    Getting into the juicy stuff straight away. That caught me off guard.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Entwined souls
    Fantasy Romance · nishidurani
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  • ChocolatChan
    ChocolatChan1mth
    Commented

    That was um... unexpected

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Entwined souls
    Fantasy Romance · nishidurani
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  • ChocolatChan
    ChocolatChan1mth
    Commented

    Very fancy

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    Entwined souls
    Fantasy Romance · nishidurani
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  • ChocolatChan
    ChocolatChan2mth
    Commented

    If you want, I can be your editor-ish. Though I don't have the best grammar, I do know some grammar rules to at least flow more easier.

    Ch 1 The Start
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    Rise of Civilizations
    Sci-fi Romance · SeanAcer
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  • ChocolatChan
    ChocolatChan3mth
    Commented

    ... why did I read something that straight out of my biology notes. But good job either way, it was very informative.

    Ch 1 Matter in our surrounding
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    Matter in our surrounding
    Sci-fi Romance · sonali_reddy
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  • ChocolatChan
    ChocolatChan3mth
    Replied to Josev_Quadra

    Oh, you mean 1st POV.

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    Ungranted
    Sci-fi Romance · Josev_Quadra
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  • ChocolatChan
    ChocolatChan5mth
    Replied to OOOOOOOOO00

    Dude i understand how you feel but you got to stop nitpick at ever little detail. the more you nitpick, the more you going to hate everything you read and if you not going to enjoy the expience, why waste your time?

    Chen Chen took out the notebook he had written in and the two Pikachu caps. After that, he fished out a lighter from the drawer and walked toward the toilet.
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    I Have A Super USB Drive
    Sci-fi · Darkness Black Bear
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  • ChocolatChan
    ChocolatChan5mth
    Replied to GrandpaPeng

    Not necessarily the system has complete control over his action, it mostly decide or generated task for not just the mc but for all players involve. Althoguh he may not have full control, considering the variable involve, he still have mastery over how he want to go out, which you can see in later chapter.

    Ch 7 Launching
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    Gamers Are Fierce
    Sci-fi · Black Light Summer Fire
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